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Nothing Like MAG

October 27, 2008
By Griffin D., Los Angeles, CA, Los Angeles, CA

Nothing takes the blue out of the sky
or the shine out of the sun
or the caress out of the breeze
like good old-fashioned

unrequited love.


The author's comments:
Because teenage love is the kind that hurts the most …

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on Jul. 20 2010 at 1:38 pm
KelleySchorn SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Whatever you are be a good one-some president i dont remember which
procrastinaters unite!...tomorrow!!-matt
i'm F-U-L-LLLLL i think i can spellllll-allie =]

really good!!!

 

 

**if you read this comment could you please check out and comment ons my work thnx :)


on Jul. 20 2010 at 11:45 am
Shadow913 SILVER, Hinckley, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Remember what they say. 'There's no shortcut to a dream. It's all blood and sweat, and life is what you manage in between."' -Lyrics from "October" by Broken Bells

So very true...teenage love is definitely the kind that kills you...great poem(:

aml1000 said...
on Jun. 28 2010 at 9:54 am
Love this poem! Excellently done!

on Jun. 28 2010 at 9:47 am
beautiful and so true! reminds me of one of my favorite quotes "nothing takes the taste out of peanut butter quite like unrequited love" ~Charlie Brown ;]

on Jun. 28 2010 at 1:32 am
CrazySquid GOLD, Cashmere, Washington
12 articles 2 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For beauty is nothing but the begining of terror"

Rilke part of 'The Tenth Elgy'

Wow... this poem is so incredably simple but its like a punch in the gut...that is in a good way :) amazing...I am literaly in awe...

on Jun. 28 2010 at 12:39 am
formylove BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
I want to make you as happy as you've made me

i loved it

 


DiceBaby GOLD said...
on Jun. 24 2010 at 11:22 pm
DiceBaby GOLD, Hartford, Connecticut
18 articles 7 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hell hath no fury like a woman's scorn

u said such few words and yet those few words touched my heart because it feels like it has described how ive been feeling for so long. thank u for this poem. u no a poem is a good one when u can make some1 feel something in their heart as they read it

on Jun. 6 2010 at 7:36 pm
mpacheco15 BRONZE, Montclair, New Jersey
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Oops! SECRETS is the name of the poem

on Jun. 6 2010 at 7:35 pm
mpacheco15 BRONZE, Montclair, New Jersey
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I did dude! It's awesome. And yea that hurts the most. If they EVENTUALLY publish my poem secrets, it's sorta sbout that whole love mess.

on May. 24 2010 at 8:32 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

hort, sweet and to the point! Can you read my poem "Not for Me"?

on May. 18 2010 at 11:15 am
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

Beautiful simplicty.

on May. 15 2010 at 9:31 pm
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
36 articles 1 photo 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."

that was absolutely an amazing poem! short and sweet and absolutely true!

GiSELA SILVER said...
on May. 15 2010 at 6:04 pm
GiSELA SILVER, Escondido, California
7 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is about doing things people said you couldn't do.

Nice peom! Short but self explanatory! (:

on May. 11 2010 at 9:31 am
live,love,smoke420 BRONZE, Auburn, New York
3 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
life's a climb, but the views great.

this is a really good poem. most poems i reed are long and not so good, but this poem explains alot, and its the truth.

on Apr. 23 2010 at 9:39 pm
Frog-Prince PLATINUM, Lakeside, California
33 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Peace is not the absence of conflict, but the ability to cope with it"

i loved it please check out some of mine =) thanks

Eilatan GOLD said...
on Apr. 23 2010 at 3:35 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
11 articles 1 photo 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

"Nothing takes the taste out of peanut bytter quite like unrequited love" -Charlie Brown

Valery5 said...
on Apr. 23 2010 at 10:56 am
Valery5, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
"What's bad for your heart is good for your art."

That's the poem says it all

Valery5 said...
on Apr. 23 2010 at 10:56 am
Valery5, Riverside, California
0 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What's bad for your heart is good for your art."

I agree! Love your poem, it's short but very good and true!

on Apr. 23 2010 at 10:19 am
poetryizlife101, Sherman, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
if i culd be nething i wuld be your teardrop. born in your eyes. live on your cheeks, and die on your lips. idk who its by but it hit me at home.

wow theres nothing to say to that

on Apr. 5 2010 at 9:32 pm
kandyraye SILVER, Parkton, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths that you take, but measured by the number of times your breath is taken away

Well put Snook.