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Nothing Like MAG

October 27, 2008
By Griffin D., Los Angeles, CA, Los Angeles, CA

Nothing takes the blue out of the sky
or the shine out of the sun
or the caress out of the breeze
like good old-fashioned

unrequited love.


The author's comments:
Because teenage love is the kind that hurts the most …

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wasatch said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 11:18 pm
short but powerful

on Apr. 1 2010 at 10:08 pm
Sweatheart SILVER, BPT, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
I can do anything

i definitely agree with u

on Apr. 1 2010 at 11:42 am
OxygenandCo2 BRONZE, Capitan, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"You can't have snobbery in music..." - Mike Shinoda of Linkin Park

this poem...it's short...but it's the bomb....

on Apr. 1 2010 at 10:41 am
decembersun14 PLATINUM, Winchester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Life sucks. A lot. But you just have to keep on going. No matter what happens. You can never ever give up. You just have to roll with the punches, go with the flow, and always try your best to keep on going <3"

short and moving. i loved it :)

Snook BRONZE said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 9:02 am
Snook BRONZE, Lake City, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
The greatest challenge to any thinker is stating the problem in a way that will allow a solution.

Love doesn't hurt any less or anymore based on your age, it all depends on the amount of love felt for the person. I will say that younger teens do tend to mistake strong feelings for someone for love. Lots of teens discover many relationships they were in were not true love compared to relatioinships you will have throughout your life. I think teens you use the word "love" to lightly is what I'm saying.

on Apr. 1 2010 at 8:45 am
shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I can sum up everything I've learned about life in three words; it goes on." -Robert Frost

its short and to the point, i like it ((:

on Mar. 28 2010 at 10:33 pm
Taylor-pop SILVER, Mole Creek, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Real friends are like diamonds true and rare.
Fake friends are like autumn leaves found everywhere.

Oh thats really pretty and even though its short i really loved i.

Good work x


on Mar. 28 2010 at 1:45 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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I'm glad I saw this, it's weird tho, i know someone with the same name and last initial as you, and I think they used to live there too... weeeeeirrd haha

on Mar. 10 2010 at 3:26 pm
Smiley92 BRONZE, Saint Jo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
True love stories never have endings.

It was great. Good job.

Escaped GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 12:46 pm
Escaped GOLD, Litchfield, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Lets go make daisy chains in the grass, but only if its 74 degrees or above. I would like to fall in love with you." (:

I love it(:

on Feb. 16 2010 at 9:12 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

wow. this is really good. short, yet so deep. awesome job!

bubblz said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 8:20 pm
that poem is honestly one of my favorites!! i can totally relate to it.....it short but has a looot of meaning:)))

Meggles SILVER said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 7:00 pm
Meggles SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
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This poem is amazing, I love how its short, but puts across it's meaning perfectly :)

on Feb. 16 2010 at 5:20 pm
JackieSutton BRONZE, Brownsburg, Indiana
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This is really goooood!!! I loved it & i know lots of people can relate to this.

on Feb. 16 2010 at 2:50 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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i love this.!!! Check out some of my work i hope u like it.! :)

on Feb. 16 2010 at 9:16 am
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

Good Job, I relly like this. It's short, but it still feels like there's a closing.

-angel

number8 SILVER said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 7:03 am
number8 SILVER, Rockford, Michigan
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cutee.........

nate+felicia said...
on Jan. 30 2010 at 7:51 am
I'm just a lucky guy!!!!!!!! and how would you know???? ;)

S1234 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 8:14 pm
S1234 BRONZE, Pelham, New York
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Wow, this was beautiful. You kept it short, but powerful all the same.

Comment on my new work if you get the chance!

on Jan. 25 2010 at 7:52 pm
aspiring.author.09 PLATINUM, Beaumont, Other
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Felicia is lucky.