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Nothing Like MAG

October 27, 2008
By Griffin D., Los Angeles, CA, Los Angeles, CA

Nothing takes the blue out of the sky
or the shine out of the sun
or the caress out of the breeze
like good old-fashioned

unrequited love.


The author's comments:
Because teenage love is the kind that hurts the most …

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on Dec. 8 2011 at 8:51 am
Musicalartist, Xxxxx, Other
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so sweet, so simple, so true

~Max <3


Audrey2 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 16 2011 at 7:08 pm
Audrey2 BRONZE, Germantown, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"I love you, master."

I like the author's comment about how teenage love hurts the most.

Dreammer GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2011 at 3:47 pm
Dreammer GOLD, Montrose, Pennsylvania
19 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like quicksand the further you fall the harder it is to get out

Love it :) please look at my work

on Nov. 16 2011 at 7:40 am
WithEyesWideOpen BRONZE, Wayne, Pennsylvania
2 articles 22 photos 242 comments

Favorite Quote:
You may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one.

this is cute.

Afra- SILVER said...
on Nov. 4 2011 at 8:32 am
Afra- SILVER, Colombo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Even when the sun sets the moon will rise.

Heheheh we would know =)

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 4:46 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

Simply beautiful- all there is for it. Also, absolutely true- love sucks when the other person doesn't love you back. If you don't have time I completely understand, but do you think that maybe you could check out my poem Sowing Poppies? Anyone?

on Oct. 25 2011 at 1:23 pm
rachelwilson SILVER, Paris, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"I went thirty minutes without seeing something of remebrance to you.. but then again,.. my eyes were closed.." -Rachel Wilson

So simple, but so beautifully put together!

fdbfdsf said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 4:39 am
fdbfdsf, Bangalore, Other
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I think the beauty of this, is the words managed to claw in to my soul, and take me back to the time when i felt this way. That's true poetry right there. Kudos

on Oct. 3 2011 at 7:53 pm
AristotlesApprentice, Moultrie, Georgia
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Very nice piece...short, but sweet. thats what i like. i love how you interlace the abstract object of love into real world objects, like the sun, the sky, and the breeze. you portray very clearly that how love, true love, can never be affected.

on Oct. 3 2011 at 3:18 pm
CatcherOfStars BRONZE, Dis, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be the change you want to see in the world.












-Ghandi

Wow! Incredibly insightful!!

on Oct. 3 2011 at 2:35 pm
Chibbie1 PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
38 articles 8 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reach for the the moon for if you fail you land amongst the stars :)

It is so simple yet so wonderful at the same time

 


Im a gypse said...
on Oct. 3 2011 at 10:19 am
you ever seen the notebook that made me CRY!!!! so old people love hurts the most to ya know???!!!!

HelloLucy said...
on Sep. 25 2011 at 4:45 pm
HelloLucy, S, Massachusetts
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I love this, it's simple and relateable.  Also, this may be a weird compliment, but I think your spacing is perfect.

on Aug. 22 2011 at 7:10 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

:D I do! I love em too. :3

on Aug. 20 2011 at 9:54 pm
emilybwrites SILVER, Villa Hills, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
last night i lay in bed, looking up at the stars and i thought to myself, where the heck is the ceiling?

great great job! please check out my poems "Forgotten Domain" and "the others" and comment and rate them :)

on Aug. 20 2011 at 1:13 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I've always been famous. It's just everybody's just now finding out." --Lady Gaga

No problem! Just as long as you read mine : )

Mtrench7809 said...
on Aug. 20 2011 at 12:42 am
Mtrench7809, Hensall, Other
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i wouldnt say this is a sweet or cute poem, though it's amazingly written, i think the point is just 2 take that happiness away from this poem :/

on Aug. 20 2011 at 12:22 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
10 articles 0 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

exactly what I was gonna say! :D I totally love this...! you couldn't have described it better! keep writing. :D btw, check out my poems...!

on Aug. 16 2011 at 5:03 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
11 articles 2 photos 276 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I've always been famous. It's just everybody's just now finding out." --Lady Gaga

I love it! Short, sweet, to the point, and ridiculously accurate! Keep writing : )

on Jul. 29 2011 at 6:14 pm
Mimi15 PLATINUM, Belfast, Maine
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J'adore! It really is super cute.  Check out some of my stuff, eh?