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Nothing Like MAG

October 27, 2008
By Griffin D., Los Angeles, CA, Los Angeles, CA

Nothing takes the blue out of the sky
or the shine out of the sun
or the caress out of the breeze
like good old-fashioned

unrequited love.


The author's comments:
Because teenage love is the kind that hurts the most …

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on Jan. 25 2010 at 10:44 am
ReflectionsofYou GOLD, Mason, Tennessee
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Good job. Short but it's good that way.

nate+felicia said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 10:40 am
Wow, great, amazing. Fits perefectly for me and my GF (hence screen name) 13 years old

jimmy_a GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2010 at 9:56 pm
jimmy_a GOLD, Sanford, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Look for me, not with a flashlight but open your heart n free your soul n there my love i shall be

i liked it short but powerful good job

on Jan. 3 2010 at 3:39 pm
WriterFanatic PLATINUM, DesMoines, Iowa
24 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
A coward is incapable of exhibiting love; it is the prerogative of the brave.
By Gandhi.

Wow. This is...fantastic. so simple and powerful. nice work

on Dec. 12 2009 at 7:41 pm
ShakingChandeliers SILVER, N.Highlands, California
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Favorite Quote:
"A thin layer of trust had formed in my mind, like a scab."

"I preferred albums to the more modern eight tracks. Albums came with sleeves which reminded me of clean underwear."
-Augusten Burroughs

I totally agree; this was fantastic!

on Dec. 12 2009 at 2:12 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

and comment. comments are always welcome.

on Dec. 12 2009 at 2:07 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

amazing. truly amazing. hey can you do me a favor and check me out and rate? greatly appreciate it.

on Dec. 12 2009 at 12:10 pm
I like this

kheart SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2009 at 11:12 am
kheart SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every second is countless. Every minute is different. When you came around." -kheart

I love this poem it is great!

on Dec. 12 2009 at 4:04 am
kandyraye SILVER, Parkton, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths that you take, but measured by the number of times your breath is taken away

Love does not hurt any less when you get older. In fact it is from my personal experience that it tends to hurt more

BlueEyes said...
on Dec. 8 2009 at 10:37 am
BlueEyes, Bremen, Alabama
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OMg this speaks to me i am in love and im terrified of it falling apart and this is so so right!

on Nov. 20 2009 at 9:18 pm
chrisbriones GOLD, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I believe nothing can be justly and completely explained by words."

i can feel it. i can feel it course through my veins. such simplicity. such preciseness. no one can hope to be able to describe love quite perfectly, however, it is indeed the individuals opinion and attempt that establish the sheer beauty of love.

classic. good ol classic. love.

on Nov. 20 2009 at 7:19 pm
lindseymarie SILVER, Richfield, Minnesota
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Short and simple, but beautiful.

Nice work.

on Nov. 20 2009 at 6:55 pm
hi,randomperson. GOLD, Fall City, Washington
13 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is not forbidden but it is a risky to fall into,but if its real-than you should stay true. Love is a funny thing,it cant be bought like a diamond ring. Love is greif and pain, you feel lost and insane.Love is a wonderful treasure,keep it forever

to me atleast- its more of an opinion thing...

on Nov. 20 2009 at 6:53 pm
hi,randomperson. GOLD, Fall City, Washington
13 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is not forbidden but it is a risky to fall into,but if its real-than you should stay true. Love is a funny thing,it cant be bought like a diamond ring. Love is greif and pain, you feel lost and insane.Love is a wonderful treasure,keep it forever

Oh yesss, this is true i hate twilight, but it does sound kind of like twilight.

on Nov. 20 2009 at 6:52 pm
hi,randomperson. GOLD, Fall City, Washington
13 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is not forbidden but it is a risky to fall into,but if its real-than you should stay true. Love is a funny thing,it cant be bought like a diamond ring. Love is greif and pain, you feel lost and insane.Love is a wonderful treasure,keep it forever

ACTUALLY ~*The-Broken-Hearted-Girl*~ it does.!.! (:

E.Lee GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 9:49 am
E.Lee GOLD, Akron, Ohio
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very well written, i love this:)

on Nov. 20 2009 at 7:36 am
Kauro-Dono BRONZE, Lil&#39burn, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"I can't control the past, but the future only I can control."

WOW. Very short, but very unique!! I really enjoyed this.

on Nov. 16 2009 at 8:28 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

i like this :)

kassiebby(: said...
on Nov. 4 2009 at 1:06 pm
i luv this[: