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Nothing Like MAG

October 27, 2008
By Griffin D., Los Angeles, CA, Los Angeles, CA

Nothing takes the blue out of the sky
or the shine out of the sun
or the caress out of the breeze
like good old-fashioned

unrequited love.


The author's comments:
Because teenage love is the kind that hurts the most …

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on Oct. 29 2009 at 9:13 pm
deathbecomes720 BRONZE, Metemora, Michigan
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"write your rough draft with your heart and rewrite it in your head"(finding forester)

well i also know the feeling love just sucks specially in my still teen yeers

on Oct. 29 2009 at 5:16 pm
yael krifcher BRONZE, Potomac, Maryland
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yessss for sure agreed, hate twilight and this was really cute.....

on Oct. 29 2009 at 3:45 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

very amazing! i loved it. :)

on Oct. 29 2009 at 3:43 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

actuallu climbergirl. no. it doesn't.

Jazzzy517 GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 3:28 pm
Jazzzy517 GOLD, Meriden, Connecticut
17 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.

i know what thats like

Narice BRONZE said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 3:03 pm
Narice BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is what you get. This is who I am.
Take me now or leave me
Any way you can.
Sometimes I trip and fall
But I know where I stand.
And if you're thinking about changing my direction,
Don't mess with imperfection.
--Saving Jane

Short And To The Point.

I Love It. :)

on Oct. 29 2009 at 12:00 pm
ariwrites94 GOLD, Deltona, Florida
17 articles 4 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." ---Plato

wonderful! i enjoyed this article! it does sound like twilight and it is short and to the point. Plz read my poem called "Sensitive Am I" and rate and comment plz! thanx!

on Oct. 29 2009 at 10:04 am
SickImage SILVER, Klamath Falls, Oregon
9 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
The room was very quiet. I walked over to the TV set and turned it onto a dead channel-white noise at maximum decibels, a fine sound for sleeping, a powerful continuous hiss to drown out everything strange."

I don't even understand how this sounds like twilight...

I liked it very much

(and i hate twilight..that's why i'm so confused lol)

TigerLynn GOLD said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 9:56 pm
TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
10 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She walks in beauty,
Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes."
--Byron

Don't listen to haters; this poem is super! WHen I was reading it I could picture nd feel the first few lines then i was totally taken by suprise at the end,but then the beginning became even better. VERY BEAUTIFUL!

on Oct. 5 2009 at 8:59 pm
headinclouds BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 2 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We were given: Two hands to hold. To legs to walk. Two eyes to see. Two ears to listen. But why only one heart? Because the other was given to someone else. For us to find."
"A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walk"

short and sweet ;)

Happy said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 10:14 am
Good writing and very true

on Aug. 9 2009 at 4:07 pm
Pink_Butterfly, FC, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Never say there is nothing beautiful in the world anymore. There is always something to make wonder in the shape of a tree, the trembling of a leaf."
- Albert Schweitzer.

Very good, kinda reminds me of twilight too, but i love it :) it very good, and its short and to the point, keep it up.!!

on Jun. 14 2009 at 2:21 am
icguf615 BRONZE, Mission Viejo, California
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its aright.

babygirl said...
on May. 22 2009 at 3:25 pm
i think this was a great and wonderful writing

i really liked it

great job!!!!

on Apr. 8 2009 at 3:00 pm
E.L.W. PLATINUM, Glen Allen, Virginia
31 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Here's to the crazy ones. The misfits. The rebels.
The troublemakers. The round pegs in the square holes -
the ones who see things differently.
They're not fond of rules and they have no respect for the status quo.
They push the human race forward.

It sounds very...Twilight-ey.

on Mar. 2 2009 at 4:29 pm
EternityBroken GOLD, Hooker, Oklahoma
17 articles 2 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is impossible to love and be wise.

wonderful job at describing something so complex in so few words, keep up the good work!

on Feb. 28 2009 at 1:41 pm
Know-Nothing BRONZE, Stow, Ohio
4 articles 4 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Meow. Frow.

True, very true.

kameron15 GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2009 at 7:42 pm
kameron15 GOLD, Gilbert, Arizona
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It isn't bad, but I'm not sure I would use "caress" to describe an action that the wind does. But it was still pretty good:)

sanra SILVER said...
on Feb. 21 2009 at 10:23 pm
sanra SILVER, Far Rockaway, New York
8 articles 7 photos 62 comments
this writing is so good.

short, but it so...touches you.

on Feb. 20 2009 at 1:30 am
CrazyRocker4Life BRONZE, Lacey, Washington
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I adore this piece.

So simple, yet so abuntant to the heart.

Nice work.

=]