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Nothing Like MAG

October 27, 2008
By Griffin D., Los Angeles, CA, Los Angeles, CA

Nothing takes the blue out of the sky
or the shine out of the sun
or the caress out of the breeze
like good old-fashioned

unrequited love.


The author's comments:
Because teenage love is the kind that hurts the most …

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on Jan. 12 2011 at 10:32 am
HipsterUnicorn. BRONZE, Pendleton, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is the Movement."

I really like the simplicity of it.

on Dec. 21 2010 at 8:43 pm
cantabile BRONZE, Boerne, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"We walk by faith not by sight" 2 Corrinthians 5:7
Let it come to you

Short and sweet. Made your point, which was great! Loved it!

on Dec. 21 2010 at 1:44 pm
Suziepatricia BRONZE, Wickliffe, Ohio
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so true :)

jujums1 GOLD said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 9:36 pm
jujums1 GOLD, New York, New York
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So naturally sensitive and well observed. I understand what you mean, although sometimes I wish I wouldn't - makes us so vulnerable. Keep sharing your work! :)

on Nov. 29 2010 at 6:31 pm
rachelchace DIAMOND, Stratford, Connecticut
65 articles 9 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If everyone were perfect, Individuality would be extinct." -Rachel Chace (me)

wow, i absolutely love this. it may be short, but those  five lines have more feeling than most i've read before. :) congratss keep writing!

Nyrihaz said...
on Nov. 29 2010 at 8:43 am
Nyrihaz, Isabela, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Listen to the screams a silent room makes"

Short and succinct but full of raw emotions. Great poem, true, as well. The irony on "... good old-fashioned unrequited love" makes me smile. The caress out of the breeze, eh? I don't believe I had heard that one. Brilliant all in all.

on Nov. 7 2010 at 5:24 pm
shoelessjoe GOLD, Highland, Michigan
19 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky's the limit when ther are footsteps on the moon"
"Instead of waiting for the storm to pass, learn to dance in the rain"
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams"

I get it, it's like love takes everything beautiful away because when you love and you lose it, it hurts and everything seems for the worst. I totally agree with your comment you wrote about what the poem is about. i love it.

bergert BRONZE said...
on Oct. 29 2010 at 9:15 am
bergert BRONZE, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"When life gives you lemons, you have to make lemonade...or else you look like an idiot standing there holding lemons."-Melissa Graulich

Wow. I know that's the truth.

I really like how succinct this poem is, I think it's really well written and raw.


on Oct. 16 2010 at 8:36 pm
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
32 articles 3 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in


~Unknown~

I remember what it felt like to be so in love, his smile was all i needed. Beautiful poem definatly keep writing

on Oct. 16 2010 at 4:39 pm
holly.nicole SILVER, Templeton, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's Only Awkward, If You Make It Awkward."

It's beautiful(: I love short poems best =D

on Oct. 16 2010 at 8:50 am
poetic_natural GOLD, Jefferson, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you know you're in love because you can't fall asleep, because reality is finally better than your dreams"

that is so true teenage love does hurt the most ...and this is beautiful

on Sep. 24 2010 at 9:42 pm
jeepster72 BRONZE, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Beauty and the Geek" -Ashton Kuthcher

so so pretty...keep writing:)

on Sep. 24 2010 at 1:33 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

amen.           

jlw11 SILVER said...
on Sep. 24 2010 at 9:43 am
jlw11 SILVER, Fayette, Alabama
5 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only things in life you regret, are the risks that you never take."

I love how this piece was very simple but it had a complex meaning. You did very well! I really enjoyed! (:

on Sep. 24 2010 at 9:16 am
OkuniTachibana GOLD, Warrensville Heights, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
As the fallen soldier walks up to the gates of heaven to St.Peter he says "another soildier reporting sir ive served my time in hell"

Yeh its verry simple but has a huge meaning to it in the end

 


on Aug. 11 2010 at 7:19 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

like the simplicity.

KelsieYellow said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 3:29 pm
It is so simple but it means so much.

on Aug. 11 2010 at 12:40 pm
splinterstar BRONZE, Arcadia, California
1 article 0 photos 10 comments
Wow.. it doesn't seep in until u look over it again as a whole. Then the great meaning of ur poem really seeps in. Congrats!!

on Jul. 20 2010 at 7:17 pm
blacknsexy360 SILVER, Glendale, Arizona
9 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"YOU CANT SUCCEED IF YOU DNT TRY"

BEAUTIFUL!!! WELL DNE!!EXQUSITE!!!

on Jul. 20 2010 at 1:55 pm
writer62 SILVER, Springfield, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
" in order to be the best you have to play the best, in order to play the best you must practice the best, in order to practice the best you must practice the most. Practice is the key to being the best!"

wow! So true and amazing! Great great great job!!!