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Nothing Like MAG

October 27, 2008
By Griffin D., Los Angeles, CA, Los Angeles, CA

Nothing takes the blue out of the sky
or the shine out of the sun
or the caress out of the breeze
like good old-fashioned

unrequited love.


The author's comments:
Because teenage love is the kind that hurts the most …

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on Jul. 29 2011 at 10:11 am
purplequeen BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
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CUTE!*****

on Jun. 15 2011 at 9:57 pm
Allis-in-Wonderland PLATINUM, Cartersville, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes people leave you...halfway through The Wood. Do not let it grieve you...No one leaves for good. You are not alone, for no one is alone." -Into The Woods

Can you please check out my poetry? And you're an amazing writer! Keep on writing! :P

on Jun. 15 2011 at 10:45 am
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

This is really good (: check out some of my stuff please~

Jbohn GOLD said...
on May. 24 2011 at 6:29 pm
Jbohn GOLD, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"You dont know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.." <3
"What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger!"- My Coach
"Forget about the past, think about the present, and dream for your future."

this is good.. comment on my work?! Life as i know it! thankss

on May. 24 2011 at 8:12 am
TolkienLewisWhitman BRONZE, Millersburg, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"All of my posessions for a moment of time." ~ Queen Elizabeth I

Short and sweet, very wonderful. The trick with short poetry is getting the point across clearly and still adding a touch of style. Here, you manage to balance the writing perfectly. It is great!

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on May. 2 2011 at 6:30 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

So true! I have too may experiences with unrequited love. 

on May. 2 2011 at 12:50 pm
WaterGirl23 BRONZE, Nutley, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them." -William Shakespeare

THIS IS SO TRUE! i love it! :D

on May. 2 2011 at 10:39 am

i thought that was awesome.

very good!


on May. 2 2011 at 8:42 am
JamesBLaurie SILVER, Montreal, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing - Benjamin Franklin

Wow, really good!

on Apr. 6 2011 at 10:04 pm
BananaHana GOLD, Chinook, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson-

i agree...i love this

on Apr. 6 2011 at 12:04 pm
this poem is my favorite yet! i strongly enjoyed reading it. i like the imagery you used to create a picture in my mind, very nice job.

on Apr. 6 2011 at 12:02 pm
i really like the poem. it's short but to the point, it has a lot of meaning. i understood what you meant and i like your use of personification.

on Mar. 28 2011 at 1:45 pm
gabzter12 BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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short and sweet (:

on Mar. 19 2011 at 5:04 pm
BriannaM. SILVER, Keller, Texas
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Amen!!!! LOL so true!

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on Mar. 19 2011 at 12:53 pm
DylanRock GOLD, Cork, Other
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And in the end, the love you take is equal to the love you make.

Short but gets the message across.

on Mar. 19 2011 at 8:01 am
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

Wow, this piece was amazing. All the words were chosen with such care, and they fit perfectly together. You accomplished establishing a meaning with so few words with your own personal style. I loved how the topic was one most people can relate to. Loved it, and continue writing!!!!

on Feb. 25 2011 at 9:45 am
Kelcey123 BRONZE, State Center, Iowa
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I love how short and simple you left it, yet you can find the meaning so easily. It leaves you wordless.

on Feb. 25 2011 at 8:58 am
ImBetterThanYou, Marshalltown, Iowa
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It was very simple but had a lot of meaning, I liked it a lot.

Angel_17 said...
on Feb. 21 2011 at 11:50 pm
Angel_17, Tucson, Arizona
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Simple yet it says it all:) 

Nick121 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 12 2011 at 5:59 pm
Nick121 BRONZE, Manhasset, New York
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Favorite Quote:
If you're trying to achieve, there will be roadblocks. I've had them; everybody has had them. But obstacles don't have to stop you. If you run into a wall, don't turn around and give up. Figure out how to climb it, go through it, or work around it.
Michael Jordan

that was short and sweet nice