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The Voice

August 30, 2009
By BreLee SILVER, Sula, Montana
BreLee SILVER, Sula, Montana
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the voice in my head,
tells me,
makes me believe,
blue skys,
mixed with foggy days,
the grass,
wispers secrets to eachother,
as i walk by,
sinking into the feelings,
the feelings that make us who we are,
piles of sand,
cover my feet,
feathers were torn from you,
from me,
the glass falls,
cutting the light,
light is fadding now,
till it once more,
will return

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on Dec. 28 2010 at 12:03 pm
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
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I absolutely love this poem! It really spoke to me in many ways! Great work!

on Dec. 28 2009 at 1:34 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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this poem makes me want to whisper softly. It's like ... i don't know, you're on a walk and you feel all the nature around you, like it's whispering to you and you want to whisper back. it's good!