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December 17, 2008
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.



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on Jun. 29 2012 at 9:26 pm
TheWhiteFlower BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
No man can be called friendless who has God and the companionship of good books. ~Elizabeth Barrett Browning

I loved it please write more

on Jun. 29 2012 at 7:47 am
tayrobin BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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this is absolutely amazing. sent shivers down my spine.

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on Jun. 26 2012 at 5:41 pm
Sarah1517 GOLD, Vashon, Washington
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We never really grow up. We only learn how to act in public.

Positively gave me goosebumps. Awesome!

on Jun. 3 2012 at 4:49 pm
CapturingShadows SILVER, Ardrossan, AB, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Reality has taught me that dreams are important, that accomplishing these dreams fulfills you.&quot;<br /> -My quote-

Very beautiful !!  Loved it !

on May. 18 2012 at 12:17 am
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland<br /> forever alone

i feel the same way abou tmy dad i wish he would come back and people underestamate having one

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on May. 11 2012 at 4:52 pm
Tiaya01 GOLD, Ninilchik, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
They say everything is bigger in texas, but they aint seen Alaska yet..

i enjoyed this alot, i often wondered what my half brothers and sister felt gorwing up with out their father and i was the one raised by him...

on May. 10 2012 at 7:03 pm
spirtualpersonification BRONZE, Glenview, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Nothing is impossible, the word impossible says i am possible&quot; - Audrey hepburn &lt;3

Incredible! I loved the word choice and description you used

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on May. 7 2012 at 10:12 pm
im_me BRONZE, Lakeview, Michigan
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&ldquo;When one door of happiness closes, another opens; But often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one that has been opened for us&rdquo;

This Poem reminds me of my brother and mother and father and how hard it is to live without them. This is an amazing poem. :)

on May. 2 2012 at 12:56 pm
lilyloveswriting BRONZE, Morrisville, Vermont
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thats good...thats really good :) fantastic, wonderful job :D

Haim :P said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 10:41 am
This poem was absolutely amazing! It made the reader realize, "what has this person been through in their life and yet I complain about mine?" The fluency of the poem made the reader be involved while reading. Keep writing! You have a great talent.

on Apr. 27 2012 at 10:46 am
Bethany VanGessel, Grandville, Michigan
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This poem makes me image what it would be like without a mother.

Alexa14 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 27 2012 at 9:48 am
Alexa14 BRONZE, Grandville, Michigan
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really good poem. great word choice!!!(*:

on Apr. 24 2012 at 9:41 pm
curlygurlray GOLD, Visalia, California
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Favorite Quote:
you have the life you let yourself take.

wow i think your right. i'm sorry for your loss even though i kno you wrote not to be pity but to vent and as a writer thats what matters most(:

Isalam said...
on Apr. 24 2012 at 7:32 pm
Isalam, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;don&#039;t judge a book by its cover.&quot;

very touching<3 :')

on Apr. 24 2012 at 4:12 pm
CupCake103111 GOLD, Spring Valley, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;The course of true love never did run smooth.&rdquo; William Shakespeare

This is amazing :)

on Apr. 19 2012 at 12:29 pm
Whitterbug BRONZE, Rainier, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;A rose can&#039;t be a dandelion, and a dandelion can&#039;t be a rose&quot; -Anonymous

AMAZING, kids are truly so ungrateful of their parents these days! Keep writing!!!!

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on Apr. 17 2012 at 9:05 am
teamo14 BRONZE, Paris, Other
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So touching! I really loved it.

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on Apr. 15 2012 at 12:07 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me &quot;Life is a choice and death is a decision&quot;-Lil Wayne

The part about being tired of hearing others talk about their aweful moms really hit a nerve with me. I'm in foster care and legally speaking I don't have parents. I just wish people would be more greatful for who and what they have. You can't fully appriciate something until it's gone.

on Apr. 13 2012 at 9:04 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;it&#039;s impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default.&quot;<br /> -J.K.Rowling

Beautiful!!! I love this... could you comment on my work if you get a chance! This is amazing

on Apr. 12 2012 at 1:26 pm
I feel like you just read my mind and wrote it down. This was amazingg .