Daddy's Womb MAG

April 23, 2008
By Carl Haynes, Staten Island, NY

i asked my father if i could swim,
and he said that i would drown.
The Sea would imprison me – he said
if my feet had left the ground.

So i walked out to the water,
and cried out – how ’bout now!
He said, a little bit further, Son,
and then you’ll leave the ground.

i stepped on sand then stone,
from hollow ground to sturdy.
The sky was at my level as I
gazed at the birdie.

The Sea brought me a new idea,
the urge to flee to the high.

i asked my Father if i could fly,
and he said, sure, Son – go try.

i jumped as high as i could.
Still, i landed on the ground.
i saw my Father pull on a chain,
then i knew that i was bound.



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on Oct. 8 2015 at 6:07 pm
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great adjectives!!!

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I cried. A poem I needed to hear

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Wow, the flow of this work is absolutely stunning! I wanted to press the 'you've got talent' button a million times! Keep writing!

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That was just so beautiful

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wow. This is great. You got comments back in 2008 and your still getting them today. 7 years later. wow

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on Sep. 11 2015 at 7:31 am
WOW that's all I got to say it was intense

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Intense, very well written.

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You have a LOT of talent! This piece is absolutely amazing!

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This is a wonderful piece of work! Keep it up!

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