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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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on Oct. 1 at 10:44 pm
AngelsImagination SILVER, Leicester, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Eleanor Roosevelt - "Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is a mystery. Today is a gift. That's why we call it 'The Present'"

Emily Dickinson - "Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul - and sings the tunes without the words - and never stops at all."

Once you post this on YouTube ( b/c it is worthy of that acknowledgment) then send us the link please :) The lyrics are beautifully written.

Luthi3n GOLD said...
on Sep. 6 at 11:17 am
Luthi3n GOLD, Doriath, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer is a world trapped inside a person." —Victor Hugo

I love the way you can feel the rhythm of the song

on May. 23 at 9:05 am
LoversOrFighters SILVER, Indepence, Kentucky
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Wow... this is really good. I would sing this myself.

on May. 23 at 12:53 am
Snake_Skullz BRONZE, Pella Ia, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Not in doing what you like, but liking what you do is the secret of happiness" - J.M Barrie

I love this. I would really love to sing this.

on Feb. 12 at 3:20 pm
capricorn2007 SILVER, Berryville, Arkansas
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This is amazing and it is really deep. I love that you used so many descriptive words to put a mental image of what is happening and I love that you can really capture the reader and make them feel what you felt when you wrote this song. This is so beautiful. This can really take you somewhere in the future.

on Feb. 10 at 3:37 pm
Amaya_ohara12, America, Arizona
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Thsi is really good and I can see someone making this a song and it is just amazing!!!

on Feb. 3 at 5:33 pm
Kingpoet2806 GOLD, Collierville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Her heart was an open book with beautiful pages and detailed lettering. She wanted people to read her story in hopes that it would make them write their own. Instead, every person who came across the pages of her heart ripped out their favorite story and took it with them. They folded back pages and bent up corners. They signed their name with sloppy writing and with a simple 'goodbye'. This book is now tucked away in the darkest parts of her, because no one wants to read a tragic story with a bad ending.

Amazing!! very emotional.

on Feb. 2 at 8:25 am
The_critic SILVER, Collingswood, New Jersey
7 articles 3 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's true, Batsy! I know everything. And kinda like the kid who peeks at his Christmas presents, I must admit, it’s sadly anti-climactic. Behind all the sturm and batarangs, you’re just a little boy in a playsuit, crying for mommy and daddy!" — Batman Beyond: Return of the Joker

“Smile, because it confuses people. Smile, because it’s easier than explaining what is killing you inside.” ― The Joker

“Let’s put a smile on that face!” – The Joker

Wow.

Brea223 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 at 3:30 pm
Brea223 BRONZE, Enid, Oklahoma
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I would really like to hear this sang with music

NoName1769 said...
on Mar. 26 2021 at 12:00 pm
NoName1769, Arlington, Texas
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love this song, keep making songs like this!

on Jan. 17 2021 at 11:19 pm
System_Error_26 PLATINUM, Edmond, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"When we're born we cry, because we feel the pain of living for the first time."- Alice C.

"Always be yourself... Unless you can be Batman. Be Batman."- Andy Biersack

"No matter how hard you try, you can never tame a wild spirit!"- CC

"I am not a monster, I am but a man."- Ronnie Radke

"Suicide is not cowardly! I'll tell you what's cowardly... treating someone so badly that they want to take their own life!"- Ashley Purdy

"I'm an artist and I make art-arty-art-art!"- Andy Biersack

"I'm TOP 'Stressed Out' what does that mean? I'm a rap fiend with a bad lead..."- NF

"I GOT A JAR OF DIRT AND GUESS WHAT'S INSIDE IT!!!"- Johnny Depp

I know how you feel, I've felt this way before when my boyfriend lied to me for months and then left me.

on Dec. 6 2020 at 9:04 pm
Mean_Beauty4768 BRONZE, Lincoln, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
“You can't start the next chapter of your life if you keep re-reading the last one.”

― Michael McMillian

I'm looking for a song for my website called Life's a Song, So Sing It. If any of you could write me one, and the best one I like will get a shout you out on my Socials.

hanna4868 said...
on Sep. 17 2020 at 2:11 pm
hanna4868, Lancaster, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Maybe okay will be our always" gus from the fault in our stars.

i love it. please make this into a song!!!

newteenboi said...
on Aug. 21 2020 at 10:36 am
newteenboi, Moore, Oklahoma
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THIS WAS GREAT!!!! It really stirred up emotion and I loved it!!!

annabanana03 said...
on Jul. 21 2020 at 10:44 pm
annabanana03, Collins, Mississippi
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Well written! It was filled with emotion and power. Very deep. I loved it. Keep it up!

lea_f910 said...
on May. 30 2020 at 12:11 am
lea_f910, Honesdale, Pennsylvania
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this was a beautiful poem and it would be an amazing song

on Mar. 9 2020 at 9:39 am
KatelynnNicole, Middleburg, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
'Never love anyone who treats you like your ordinary.'






















-Oscar Wilde

I agree with @Armando, these lyrics really reached out, and it would be a great song.

_Armando said...
on Dec. 19 2019 at 1:37 pm
_Armando, Sacramento, California
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Yo this hit me it was very good and you should make it into a actual song

on Dec. 19 2019 at 1:32 pm
claudia-padilla, Sacramento, California
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I like the emotion in your song. I think this is very powerful.

on Dec. 13 2019 at 11:52 am
Goku_Nativeson, Ogema, Minnesota
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Tour very good