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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.

© Adam B., Highland Village, TX

The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.
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amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 15 2010 at 11:22 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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You totally need to write out the chord progression to this
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 15 2010 at 11:19 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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You should post a chord progression up too.  That would be awesome, then all of us guitarists out there could play this song!
cutebunny_10 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 14 2010 at 12:40 pm
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I AGREE ! :)
LoveSickenedRebel GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 7:22 am
LoveSickenedRebel GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
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dude that should be on the radio playing right now!!! it reminded me of how one stupid guy can cut u up so much. thanks for writing this song. i really love it.
MyFairyTaleEnding SILVER said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 2:13 pm
MyFairyTaleEnding SILVER, Villa Ridge, Missouri
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This is absolutly amazing...it actually triggered old feelings I have felt. I wish I could write songs that well! Great job!:)
BeautifullyBroken18 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 5:56 pm
BeautifullyBroken18 BRONZE, Del Rio, Texas
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this is one of the deepest saddest songs i've read all day on here. I like it though. I can relate. And the lyrics are ... well i've never seen a better choice of words to be strung together before in my life. Beautiful.
LoveKills GOLD said...
on Jun. 10 2010 at 4:49 pm
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im at a lost for words when i read this. its just a wow song. in a great way
FateshiddenWriter GOLD said...
on May. 5 2010 at 8:23 am
FateshiddenWriter GOLD, Williamsburg, Virginia
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i love it!!

i can relate to it

 

=]

darkdestro27 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 19 2010 at 9:04 pm
darkdestro27 PLATINUM, West Jefferson, Ohio
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this is amazing never thought i would say this but i feel jelouse of your talent
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 8:54 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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No, I just sing. lol.
Meli138 said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 7:40 pm
Meli138, GP, Texas
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Lol glad to hear that! Its an awesome song! :)
curlikap18 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 3:36 pm
curlikap18 BRONZE, Newark, Delaware
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oh. well thats okay too! Are you like a musician, like do you play anything?
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:28 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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Thank You. It definitely helps me not worry about those other comments. lol
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:27 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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I would just like to say, because of your comment, Watch Me Bleed by Scary Kids Scaring Kids is now one of my favorite songs. However it is alot slower than this one, and I must admit much more beautiful.
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:25 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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probably never. sorry.lol
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:23 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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Uhm well It already has a tune...I just don't know how to write music so...
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:22 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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Was there a point to any of that?
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:22 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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It does already have a tune...
WonderDreamer23 BRONZE said...
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i love it it's abosutly great check it out! WOW can i give it some music make it real big?
criminalninja<33 SILVER said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 7:21 pm
criminalninja<33 SILVER, Hidalgo, Texas
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bambambam

what's that?

excellency :)