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Bleed [A Song]
July 7, 2009
Just Let Go.
Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?
LET GO.
Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?
Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.
BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?
As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?
AS I BLEED.
Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.
Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.
Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.
Wont you hold me close?
As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.
Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.
© Adam B., Highland Village, TX
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This article has 181 comments.
chris709 said...
on Jul. 29 2015 at 4:08 am
Why would you cut yourself?
xrileysykesx BRONZE said...
on Jun. 10 2015 at 12:13 pm
I like it I might be late with this but im a cutter so I undersand this feeling 100%
ShadowBlossom ELITE said...
on Oct. 25 2014 at 2:08 am
The song is very good, creative, and I could imagine the pain and anger put into the song, the betrayl and heart ache or break. Yet if you added or had a chorus that repeated itself in the lyrics it would be even better.
USMClover said...
on Feb. 21 2014 at 10:48 am
I really like this song. You should make it into an actual song.
USMClover said...
on Feb. 21 2014 at 10:47 am
Oops. Sorry. I meant to press new comment. Not reply.
USMClover said...
on Feb. 21 2014 at 10:45 am
I really like this song. You should make it an actual song.
Asherton said...
on Jan. 22 2014 at 8:23 am
I really like it ,and i just think tht there should be a little more chorus somewhere in there <3
BlackRosetears BRONZE said...
on Jul. 21 2013 at 6:26 pm
This was so awesome! I wish i could write a song soo good (Jellous) keep wrting
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 9:24 am
I really liked it, but it seemed a bit shallow/repetitive. It's almost as if you were just repeating the same thing, but I can also see how that could initiate power on your end. That's just my opinion, though! You have every right to disagree.
gothgirl99 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 24 2013 at 4:05 pm
i looooovve this :)))) its really awesome
WithShatteredWings SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2012 at 11:15 am
I've attempted to start some bands in the past and have only recently decided to go solo. I do screamo. Maybe not the best. I play drums and guitar. IF you do give me your full permission I can easily record the song and give you full credit for lyrics since you did write them. :)
WithShatteredWings SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2012 at 11:15 am
I've attempted to start some bands in the past and have only recently decided to go solo. I do screamo. Maybe not the best. I play drums and guitar. IF you do give me your full permission I can easily record the song and give you full credit for lyrics since you did write them. :)
WithShatteredWings SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2012 at 11:12 am
Very good song I'll say so myself. I saw this and started screaming the words in Caps. Is it okay if I take these as a cover song and put you as the composer since this is your work? You'd get all the credit. I would just really love to see how this sounds recorded.
DanceOfBlades PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 3 2012 at 6:20 pm
I love your word choice, and the kind of song this is. I really would bomb it into my ears for hours!
FireRose16 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 18 2012 at 1:48 pm
Dude, I got chills reading this. Beautiful and powerful, I loved it!
