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Hallucinations MAG

June 22, 2016
By wolfvomit PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
wolfvomit PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
25 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
“don’t fall slave to the serpent’s tongue”


I dreamed that night,

Afraid that I'd see you in my nightmares.

Wave upon wave of stars and planets crashed over me as I slept,

Drowning me with space.

Space.

It was the only thing I thought I needed.



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Cam_is_Away said...
on Feb. 1 2017 at 6:50 pm
Cam_is_Away, Non, California
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Congrats, Luka!! You deserve to be published, all your work is amazing. You're a very talented writer - whoop - author! I agree with what @Sonder said, you are able to beautifully convey meaning with so few words - that's a rare art. I love this poem. especially the last couple lines. Great work! :D

on Jul. 23 2016 at 11:50 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
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This is one of my favorites, and like previously mentioned before there was a great use of the word space with different meanings. I really liked it.

on Jul. 7 2016 at 1:23 pm
FallenAngel11283 PLATINUM, Cincinnati , Ohio
20 articles 1 photo 25 comments
I love this it's short and even simple in a way. You have talent and I love your work a lot :)

on Jul. 6 2016 at 9:50 am
Sliced_Bread BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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75! yup making this happen

on Jul. 6 2016 at 9:48 am
Sliced_Bread BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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You're pieces are so wonderful I love them! (only 76 more to go)

on Jul. 6 2016 at 9:44 am
Sliced_Bread BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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I'm gonna comment on your pieces here just to prove hammad wrong

Sonder said...
on Jun. 30 2016 at 7:27 pm
Sonder, Wattpad, Other
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So much conveyed in a few verses. Congratulations on the editor's choice!

Air568 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 29 2016 at 10:47 am
Air568 BRONZE, Vienna, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only thing to fear is fear itself.

I have dreamed dreams no mortal has ever dared to dream.

This is really good. I really like the depth of your writing.

on Jun. 28 2016 at 2:54 pm
wolfvomit PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
25 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
“don’t fall slave to the serpent’s tongue”

Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

on Jun. 28 2016 at 2:11 am
ItsTimeToBegin PLATINUM, Lexington, Massachusetts
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Nice use of the different meanings of the word "space"!


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