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Internal Combustion

March 29, 2015
By TheFuzzyPlatypus BRONZE, Fredericksburg, Virginia
TheFuzzyPlatypus BRONZE, Fredericksburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Hold fast to dreams <br /> For if dreams die <br /> Life is a broken-winged bird <br /> That cannot fly. <br /> Hold fast to dreams <br /> For when dreams go <br /> Life is a barren field <br /> Frozen with snow. <br /> --Langston Hughes


clouds run down your face with the ease of an ocean wave on a warm summer night/

tears hit the floor with the pounding of your father's hammer on the nail that won't budge/

laughter is stalled with the silence of a thousand crickets who lost their pins/

hearts interlaced like the strings on a peg held tight by lyrical harmony/

wishes for hate held back by a dam of blood stained bricks/

eyes closed with the trust of a promise bound by love/

hope lost in a second like a child in a maze piled high with curiosity/

the life of a dream woken by a warning for dawn is in sight/

torture as if that was the only way to see through lies of last minute innocence/

cares washed away like a spill of wine on your mother's white carpet that soon becomes an unforgettable imperfection/

rain falls like the wounded dragon in the tale of heroes and sacrifice/

it starts slowly like falling asleep Christmas night, knowing the surprise to come/

then your eyes start to sting and your feet falter/

is this what it feels like to fall apart/

one seam at a time/

perhaps this is what it feels like to drop from the sky/

the downside to internal combustion/


The author's comments:

I wrote this poem for an opening called First Friday at a studio where I took writing classes. I was given the picture of a small felt dragon that a local artist created. It was holding a small book titled "Internal Combustion." I was not sure how to go about writing on that topic, for I was not familiar with the concept of internal combustion. I decided to go with metaphors and talk about falling apart, as in you cannot handle the stress and so you break down.  


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Scully said...
on Apr. 8 2015 at 6:54 am
A poem with striking commentary of the mental psychosis of a youth's mind. Imagery is as vivid as it is abstract. An awesome poem!