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The Moon and The Stars

June 12, 2014
By vitoingrande SILVER, Spring Valley, California
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look its superman

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Here in the sky are the moon and the stars. It is dark out and i can't anything around me. All i see is the moon and the stars in the sky shing above me.

© Vanessa M., Glendale, AZ

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Sky and stuff
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KingFoe SILVER said...
on Jun. 17 2014 at 5:10 pm
KingFoe SILVER, Morristown, New Jersey
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You should check your spelling a little more before posting. As for the poem it does repeat itself, which can ge good in some poems. In this poem I wish the third line was changed. The sky is a great topic for a poem though.