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Just to Let You Know MAG

By Anonymous

Your butchering words
In the beginning
Went through my head
As a child who listens
To every word you say

Your constant sarcasm
Your words which
I thought were the truth
The never giving up

Just to let you know, Dad
Those butchering words
To me are now worthless
For I know now
It was only your sickness

© Anonymous

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TobiasEliot DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 28 2018 at 9:09 am
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Well, Sparaxis, you would hate me then
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To me, there is nothing more obnoxious than someone who is constantly sarcastic.
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Awesome!... Please comment on my work!
MarieAntoinette2014 DIAMOND said...
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Wow!!!!!! This is really, really good! :-)
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it's really intense and awesome!  Woud you mind commenting on my work? 
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Very easy for me to relate to. Loved it!
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i love it. my dad was the same way
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This was quite meloncholy. I hope nothing is really going on. I like this poem. Not like the rest,but you made one of the excpetions. Keep writing. I expect more!
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:( reallllly goooood poem(: sad story tho...
schuy PLATINUM said...
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Such a beautiful and heartwrenching poem. I can relate in so many ways. I'm glad it was published xx
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Hi,

Wow, this is such a heartwrenching poem. You said so much without really saying much. Lovely work.

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i agree i really like this poem makes me think of my own father

 

samlynn BRONZE said...
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Your poem paints a very clear picture! It's a very well put together poem.
morgan mcdermott BRONZE said...
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i love this poem, describes everything right
Lauren_Kay said...
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I really like the meaning behind the story, and in some indirect way, I feel like I can relate to your poem.
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I am glad this was published.
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This poem is one of very few I've read were I can relate Very well to. good job.
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i really like this. it seems as if you went through this. i felt as if you were angery when you wrote this. if i am wrong just find on of my forums and let me know.