Pudding | Teen Ink


January 29, 2013
By Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
36 articles 1 photo 77 comments

I feel like pudding
Liquid, like goo
Pumping heart
Beating head
Take me away
Snatch me from the sea
The vast ocean of rain and tears
And daydreams
Let me follow you
Smile with your eyes
And kiss me with your lips
Hold me
I don’t know what to do with myself
I am an explosion of love
I am yours
The strings on my fingers
Are strumming me
As if in a puppet
I want to follow you wherever you are
I want to see you
And take you all in
Never go away
Melting. We are melting
In and out
Of each other
The gloom spreads
But our love wins
I love you
Love flowing into me
Where to put it. Where to put it?
The water to the seas
The leaves to the trees
The flowers to the bees
Yours, eternally

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This article has 7 comments.

on Feb. 6 2013 at 12:38 am
daywalker67 BRONZE, Pleasantville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Don’t underestimate the power of doing nothing, of just going along and listening to all the things you can’t hear, and not bothering.”

So good! Amazing writing! :-)

Alandra BRONZE said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 3:57 am
Alandra BRONZE, Salt Lake City, Utah
2 articles 2 photos 7 comments
I also agree with Sakuya...

Alandra BRONZE said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 3:56 am
Alandra BRONZE, Salt Lake City, Utah
2 articles 2 photos 7 comments
This poem made me smile ;) 

on Feb. 3 2013 at 8:15 pm
AmandaFish GOLD, Draper, Utah
11 articles 3 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who doth not know me, cannot love me.

I really liked it! I sat there and just kept going,"Aw that's so cute! Awww!" I like the writing style and the wording of it all. The rhyming at the end kinda caught me off guard cause I wasn't expecting it. Over all I think it's quite good :)

on Feb. 3 2013 at 5:00 pm
Sakuya PLATINUM, Richmond, Virginia
39 articles 12 photos 63 comments
Haha I see the title and and expect an indepth poem about the food and instead I get a very nice poem about love, and the flow of the piece creates this "pudding" feeling

on Feb. 3 2013 at 4:07 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
18 articles 0 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.” - Doctor Seuss

Hm, i like it alot, but the use of the title Pudding and the use of it in the poem kind of throws off the romanitc quality of it... :/

on Feb. 3 2013 at 4:07 pm
slytherin_girl SILVER, Granger, Indiana
5 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I kissed the scars on her skin. I still think you're beautiful, and I don't ever wanna lose my best friend." ~ Pierce the Veil

thats adorable!!! teehee pudding :)