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Honolulu

January 17, 2013
By alanna31 BRONZE, Vienna, Virginia
alanna31 BRONZE, Vienna, Virginia
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Crash, bubble, I hear the waves
foaming as they break
The addicting sound
the heavy, thick, salty air
The calming blue

Blue waves, blue ocean, blue sky
The tides energized me,
I was drawn to the ocean,
Addicted

Alive, excited, happy
The heavy smell of tropics
the flowers
the fruit

Sand on my bare feet
like a foot scrub
water tickled them
foam bubbled around them

Slippery soft sand
bubbling blue beach water

Hawaii


The author's comments:
I took a trip to honolulu and I was taken aback by the beauty. It was one of the most magical and memorable experiences and I wanted to share that with others. I wrote this poem to share this amazing experience. I hope the imagery in this poem can inspire readers as the ocean inspired me.

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