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Freedom will find you !

September 30, 2011
By Aarti BRONZE, Vskp, Other
Aarti BRONZE, Vskp, Other
2 articles 11 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is your's to design , then why follow the rules laid down by others ,make your own rules and rule your own world because life is what you make of it .


In the search of freedom ,
we loose our tracks .
I guess the cause is boredom ,
ThAt pulls us back.

Sometimes we just regret,
When the best is just to forget.
And a dream ,
Where you can hear youself scream.
Where we want to run away from everywhere we go ,
But still be there for once and all.

Freedom is always within you,
That could bring up something new.
Just go on with your belief ,
And not just try to leave .

The path will shine when required ,
But it may take long .
Though you maybe tired ,
Just go along with the life song .

Because you never know ,
When life could show ,
It's true colours,
for once and all .

The author's comments:
A teenagers life takes the most unexpected turns & teens are always trying to seek freedom whereas they go on the wrong path & learn a lesson about the values of life everytime they make a mistake .
-stop trying to seek freedom & wait for it to come to you .
A lesson that I learnt by making mistakes :)

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Aarti BRONZE said...
on Nov. 9 2011 at 6:00 am
Aarti BRONZE, Vskp, Other
2 articles 11 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is your's to design , then why follow the rules laid down by others ,make your own rules and rule your own world because life is what you make of it .

Yeah I will surely do that :) thankyou:D

on Oct. 25 2011 at 6:46 pm
cayaTW PLATINUM, Yuma, Arizona
29 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
Those who forget history will often repeat it

This poem had a good message.  You should so incorporate it into a story.