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where did you go

August 30, 2009
By brittany curths SILVER, Hubbard, Oregon
brittany curths SILVER, Hubbard, Oregon
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from a window i saw her run , the angel who made me born , she caught my eye momentarly smiling , then to mouthing goodbye , now its my heart , begining to pound , hystaricaly screaming , sighlently suffering , she was no where to be found.

The author's comments:
this was a poem i wrote in 8th grade about my mom.

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SimplyCamila said...
on Mar. 1 at 7:42 pm
SimplyCamila, Greensboro, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"She was beautiful, but not like those girls in magazines. She was beautiful, for the way she thought. She was beautiful, for the sparkle in her eyes when she talked about something she loved. She was beautiful, for her ability to make other people smile, even if she was sad. No, she wasn't beautiful for something as temporary as her looks. She was beautiful, deep down to her soul. She is beautiful."-F. Scott Fitzgerald & "No one has ever become poor by giving."-Anne Frank

The writing in this piece has such an amazing flow!

on May. 11 2010 at 1:32 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

I really like this one "The angel who made me born" was a beautiful line.