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where did you go

August 30, 2009
By brittany curths SILVER, Hubbard, Oregon
brittany curths SILVER, Hubbard, Oregon
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from a window i saw her run , the angel who made me born , she caught my eye momentarly smiling , then to mouthing goodbye , now its my heart , begining to pound , hystaricaly screaming , sighlently suffering , she was no where to be found.

The author's comments:
this was a poem i wrote in 8th grade about my mom.

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PeppyGirl said...
on Mar. 1 at 7:42 pm
PeppyGirl, Greensboro, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"No one has ever become poor by giving". -Anne Frank

The writing in this piece has such an amazing flow!

on May. 11 2010 at 1:32 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

I really like this one "The angel who made me born" was a beautiful line.