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Real Fraud

February 2, 2010
By xLpoet SILVER, Bristow, Virginia
xLpoet SILVER, Bristow, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"It is not the length of life but the depth of life"- Ralph Waldo Emerson


Mid-dawn
the red phases
pouring acid rain
melting my skin
burning and stinging my insides
I feel for my face
dropped down at ripping wet puddles
rendering to my reflection
rims of brackish mellow
flints drug my eyes
shattered mirrors of my destruction



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on Feb. 22 2010 at 5:09 pm
carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
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Wow. this is a really intense poem.

I have to say, there is so much meaning in each word, it took me about 5 minutes to even get a small part of the overall picture.

Great job!

Also, thanks so much for commenting on my work...it made my day :)