All Nonfiction
- Bullying
- Books
- Academic
- Author Interviews
- Celebrity interviews
- College Articles
- College Essays
- Educator of the Year
- Heroes
- Interviews
- Memoir
- Personal Experience
- Sports
- Travel & Culture
All Opinions
- Bullying
- Current Events / Politics
- Discrimination
- Drugs / Alcohol / Smoking
- Entertainment / Celebrities
- Environment
- Love / Relationships
- Movies / Music / TV
- Pop Culture / Trends
- School / College
- Social Issues / Civics
- Spirituality / Religion
- Sports / Hobbies
All Hot Topics
- Bullying
- Community Service
- Environment
- Health
- Letters to the Editor
- Pride & Prejudice
- What Matters
- Back
Summer Guide
- Program Links
- Program Reviews
- Back
College Guide
- College Links
- College Reviews
- College Essays
- College Articles
- Back
Target
March 6, 2011
Summary:
Ex-firefighter, Emmit Anderson, woks for the government after the accident. When he is entrusted with top secret government information, he doesn't know what he's getting into. Nobody was supposed to suspect a government desk worker, but they were wrong.
Ryter
Target
Similar books
Previous Next
JOIN THE DISCUSSION
This book has 26 comments.
emilybwrites SILVER said...
on Aug. 12 2011 at 8:18 pm
wow this was fantastic great imagery i loved it! please check out my poem "Forgotten Domain" and please comment!!!
Steph0804 said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 9:58 am
*Sniff* I was hoping that Bernice was gonna kill Vince.
Steph0804 said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 9:41 am
Hm... if the woman pronounces her w's as v's, shouldn't she pronounce her th's as z's?
By the way, I was hooked from the first page :)
Ryter said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 9:00 pm
One can dream, or one can work. Depends on how stressed I am at the time. LOL.
singingwriter14 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 8:57 pm
Well you never know...;-)
Ryter said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 8:14 pm
Thanks! Actually, everything I write, I see as a movie, hence my inspiration: real actors/actresses! I plan one day for one of my stories to be made into a movie! But we all know I've got 1/1000000000000000 (i dont even know how many zeros I just put...) chance of that ever happening. I guess I just have to meet the right people. :/
singingwriter14 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 11:16 am
Wow. I am so glad you added more to it. This is so good! Keep going. I need to know more! This would make an awesome movie. I like the suspense with Emmit. I mean, they didn't say he was dead, right? I am so pumped to read more! Go Ryter! :-D
Basketball23 SILVER said...
on Mar. 17 2011 at 3:29 pm
Haha well I lvoe everything about it!!! I can't wait to read more!!!
Ryter said...
on Mar. 17 2011 at 3:24 pm
I know! xD
Basketball23 SILVER said...
on Mar. 17 2011 at 3:17 pm
You're so evil!!!!
Ryter said...
on Mar. 17 2011 at 3:14 pm
I don't know >:)
Basketball23 SILVER said...
on Mar. 17 2011 at 3:12 pm
Oh my goodness!!! Now I'm confused...is he dead or isn't he?!?!?!?!
Ryter said...
on Mar. 16 2011 at 7:19 pm
How do you know he's dead? Did you read my little side comment? >:)
Basketball23 SILVER said...
on Mar. 16 2011 at 3:16 pm
OH MY GOSH!!!! I don't have a single thing to criticize about this. Target is most definitely the BEST story I've every read. GREAT JOB!!! This is absolutely amazing!!!! I love everything about this. It must be so hard for Bernice to kill Emmit...awwww :`( It's so sad and emotional and everything. This is fantastic!!! I can't wait to hear the rest!!!!
Ryter said...
on Mar. 12 2011 at 8:56 am
Haha, yeea. Well, you never know what may happen :)
Internal-Love PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 12 2011 at 8:49 am
yes, i knew Bernice was a Russian spy :) It reminds me of the movie Salt!
And thanks, that really clears it up!!
Now i kinda feel bad for the guy with the package. All because it was given to him, he's gotta be killed!
Ryter said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 9:33 pm
Urg! I can never get one thought onto one post! Bernice is a Russian spy/trained killer. I thought I made that clear, but I guess I'll have to make it a little more clear. The disks are US government secrets, and she is collecting them for her government's use. I know in real life, we are like allies (sp?) with Russia or something to that effect, but I'm also not sure when this takes place, but it doesn't matter really. This is basically a first draft and I'll have to fix some things up (obviously) and it's hopefully going to be better.
Ryter said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 9:25 pm
By the way: The disks are government secrets
Ryter said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 9:05 pm
Let me just say, they are not going to run away together. >:) does that put you back to the first square of figuring out what's going to happen?
0 articles 0 photos 23 comments
Warm regards,
lauren