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Time MAG

November 7, 2007
By Anonymous

Every morning I wake up to the normal sun shooting through the left window, blinding me as I try to open my eyes. My dog, Donald, barks up a storm. He insists that every morning at exactly 7:04, he has to go outside. It really is starting to push my buttons. Can’t that damn dog just take a rest?

After I go outside for exactly 2.5 minutes, I realize I have to deal with my boss in exactly 48.6 minutes. I sit and moan for two minutes. Any more I would be late and any less I would be early: it has to be exactly two minutes. Afterward, I do my normal six-minute shower, three-minute shave, two-minute brush of my teeth – just like the dentist told me – and five minutes to figure out what I am going to wear ­today. That leaves me 4.5 minutes to sit and read The New York Times and moan about having to drive 20 minutes to a job that I can’t stand. Once I arrive, it takes 2.1 minutes to hear the lame story about what Ron, the guy two cubicles down, did last night and four minutes ’til I get to hear my boss complain that I never do anything right.

Spending 9.34 hours at my job, driving 26 minutes home (I hate traffic), taking two minutes to take Donald out and only getting 24.7 minutes to myself before lying down in my hard, cold bed and not falling asleep for another 12.5 minutes can really drive someone crazy. At least that is what my therapist tells me. But in fact it does not make you crazy; it makes everyone else crazy for not wanting to know how much time they actually have.

The thing that will make you crazy is if something goes wrong. Something that has been happening the same way for exactly 12.56 years. When that one thing goes wrong, all hell breaks loose. For instance, if you wake 45.8 minutes late because there is no damn dog barking for you to take him out. Which causes you to be late to work, because you have a 20-minute drive and only 2.4 minutes to get there. Then you ­decide in exactly 24 seconds that you have to call in to work saying you came down with something. But after the phone rings for eight seconds, the secretary tells you that something bad has happened and there will be no work today. You wonder for only one minute what could have happened, but then go and take a shower.

The shower is much longer than the normal six minutes. It takes two more minutes to wonder what is the red goop dripping from your body. Then it takes you two more minutes to realize that you probably just cut yourself shaving.

After 45.8 minutes of watching TV, you wonder where Donald is and what really happened today to call off work. You ponder this for 12 minutes, scratching your chin, noticing the red goop is also under your nails. You find that disgusting, so you walk steps, which takes you three seconds, to go wash your hands, for two minutes, in the bathroom that you never use. You look around for four minutes, noticing there is also red goop all over the walls. You quickly – so fast you can’t count the time – open the shower curtain.

In about seven minutes you realize you have to clean up. But suddenly there is a knock on the front door lasting for about four seconds. But you have to ignore it, you don’t have time, you have to clean up in six minutes. But wait, six minutes is too long. You need 4.5 minutes, but that’s too short. The knocking is getting louder and faster, every three seconds, it just won’t stop. You can’t stop either; you have to clean up, but the knocking ….

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. said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 7:45 am
Nice story!  Please check out mine, Sean Flynn, if you get the chance.  Thanks! 

on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:14 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

no. trust me, it's 'til with one L. i know this because wasted an entier hour of my life reading a handout from one of my english classes that was all about 'the 10 most commen mistakes writers make' and there was an entier paragraph on ''til' that included examples of it's incorrect use from variouse best selling authors, including something from The davinchi Code.

on Jul. 7 2011 at 8:46 pm
ErisRose DIAMOND, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Omnia vincit amor et nos cedamus amori- Love conquers all let us yield to love
Sweat Dries, Blood Clots, Bones Heal, Suck it up and dance!
If they give you ruled paper, write the other way

I simply love this!! I love how it has all of the minutes, down the seconds too! so much like having OCD. I love the "red goop" leaves a lot to figure out. and the cliffhanger ending, you wonder what happens. did he kill his dog and his boss???

. said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 2:19 pm

Wow, this really makes you take some time (1.4 minutes) to think about what you just wrote. Very good, I LOVED it! :)

[What happened to your dog and what was behind the shower curtain?'

on Jul. 7 2011 at 1:49 pm
MaryRoseB. BRONZE, San Jose, California
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I thought that was the only way to spell 'til. But on autocorrect it spells it like 'till. Hmm..

Erin S. said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 10:23 am
I agree completely.

Curly_Sue said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 9:43 am
Curly_Sue, Sand Springs, Oklahoma
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interesting take on something horrible. what's the knocking?

on Jun. 15 2011 at 9:33 pm
kagebrubak GOLD, Sidney, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"As you get closer to the light, the greater your shadow becomes."
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby."
"The best way to become boring is to say everything."
"Forget arrogance, just ask and recieve"

The ending was well constructed, but the whole begining seemed as if it had no point to it.

on Jun. 15 2011 at 5:33 pm
AlyssaFama SILVER, Kunkletown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Most people want to be the sun that brightens your day. I'd rather be the moon that shines down on you in your darkest hour.

really interesting! write more

on Jun. 15 2011 at 1:00 pm
That was very interesting....the way you wrote it made the effect go hand in hand with the the tone and mood of the whole story! It was very well done--keep writing!

on Jun. 15 2011 at 11:52 am
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 231 comments

Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous


sorry--the rest of the story was awesome. did the main character kill his boss? the red goop had to be blood...i'm sorry. i'm over analyzing. but i am just so happy to find ONE peice of writting that finaly uses the right spelling of 'til.'

on May. 31 2011 at 12:23 pm
BookFreak14 BRONZE, Grand Prairie, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
" We didn't invent the Chicken, just the Chicken Sandwich."--- Chick-Fil-A

Interesting.... I really liked it.... keep writing... it was AWESOME!!!

on May. 24 2011 at 8:46 pm
AliceFurukawa BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"My mom always told me the key to life was happiness. At school they asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down 'happy'. My teacher told me I didn't understand the assignment, I told him he didn't understand life." -John Lennon

This is awesome. I love the detail and precision of the necessity of time. How everything is timed straight down to the bare second. It's much like having O.C.D. I do wonder what all the red goop is as well as who is pounding at the door...dark and spooky. I like it! :)

on May. 24 2011 at 5:32 pm
Mojo4133 BRONZE, Tropy Club, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“It's all fun and games, until someone looses an eye...than it's fun and games you can't see anymore.”
-James Hetfield

Nice keep writing! =D

on May. 20 2011 at 1:49 pm
Mojo4133 BRONZE, Tropy Club, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“It's all fun and games, until someone looses an eye...than it's fun and games you can't see anymore.”
-James Hetfield

Agreed. This was an awsome story. Creeped me out.

evergreen232 said...
on May. 18 2011 at 6:16 pm
evergreen232, Portland, Oregon
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i totally agree!!!! now im sitting in my dark basement...kinda freaked out haha!

on May. 13 2011 at 2:34 pm
tikapeek97 BRONZE, Waterboro, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"good things come in small packages" =)

really good, I liked it a lot. it was really cool. I think the ending could have been a little stronger, but the beggening was really good. You should check out my story Guilty at heart.

on May. 2 2011 at 8:10 pm
smilemaddysmile BRONZE, Laguna Niguel, California
4 articles 3 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The function of music is to release from the tyranny of conscious thought." -- Sir Thomas Beecham

great job! the eeriness/suspense was... unnervingly precise. i mean it in a good way when i say i was thoroughly creeped out, haha!

on May. 2 2011 at 6:11 pm
rachelnicole1257 SILVER, Mountain Home, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"Expecting the world to treat you fairly because you are good is like expecting bull not to charge because you are a vegetarian." ~Dennis Wholey

I was intrigued by the first half of the story, but I didn't care much for the ending. It could have been a little stronger. I think you have a lot of potential as a writer though. Keep writing! :)

on May. 2 2011 at 4:05 pm
Cerberus SILVER, Middletown, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Be a leader, not a follower."

personally i would have closed the ending a little more but thts just my style. But i still liked :) it was very...consumeing