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My Iona

August 28, 2010
By Lucylou BRONZE, Corvallis, Oregon
Lucylou BRONZE, Corvallis, Oregon
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments

He met her gaze and saw the fury churning in her gray eyes as they turned as dark and as unwavering as the sea, gloomy. He could not bear it and turned away. His love, his desire, could not be tempered by her anger, and as she realized this something within her lost all hope. She felt her life slip out of her grasp, and inwardly she died. Her cheeks still held their color, her body kept it's strength, yet her spirit fell cold.

She had not thought it would be this way. A new way of life was so tempting, a life filled with different textures and sensations, different emotions. She had also known what would happen if she chose to reveal herself, had known what was to happen and be since she first laid eyes on him.

She looked out onto what she had sacrificed; the sea was rife and troubled, the spray reaching to the sky as the waves crashed against each other. But she knew what lay beneath. She knew that sound of peace that rested just below the surface, the calm and silance that permeated the soul.

A pang of physical hurt shot through her heart for a moment, half a moment, before it turned to stone.

She turned to him, and he saw her mouth set and the color of her eyes grow dim. Her tone was dispassionate as she spoke to him for the first time, "Come, my husband, and take us to your dwelling." For a brief moment he considered giving back what he took, but then he realized how the darkness of her eyes matched the splendor of the midnight blue sky, how her irises glimmered faintly like stars, and he was lost forever. He slowly folded the seal skin and tucked it under his arm. With his free hand he carefully took her by the elbow and guided her out of the rocks. She followed without resistance. She looked over her shoulder on last time, and she allowed herself a trace of wistful sadness for her children when the time came for her to leave them.

For a time when she could no longer bear the call of the sea, and came home.

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on Aug. 31 2010 at 7:11 pm
NeverCaredForKool-Aid GOLD, Elkridge, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
I don't believe in hell but I believe in my parent's couch-- Watsky

This was so cool!  Is the girl a Selkie?  Mst people don't write about them, most don't even know what they are!  This was really cool and original, I loved it :)

The romance was really good, and the detail was just phenominal.  For a little while I was confised about what he stole, but then you mentioned the seal skin and i was like "Oh my gosh, a Selkie!"  Great job, keep writing!

Can you comment and rate my story, "Encounter"?

Lucylou BRONZE said...
on Aug. 30 2010 at 11:00 pm
Lucylou BRONZE, Corvallis, Oregon
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments
I didn't pick out the artwork... I wanted to make that clear.