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Author's note:
Currently I'm still working on this story. I was inspired by Disney's Beauty and the Beast. I...
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Epilouge
This poem is for my readers who want to get a glimpse at the ending. 
My Social Class Gem.
Always making sure that she’s not one of them.
Her eyes are distant
And her words are sweet,
She’s a girl that can never be beat.
She’s sweet,
And kind
Like a jewel that’s very hard to find.
As she helps me leave my troubles behind.
I won’t ever stop loving her
My Social Class Gem.
As she stays in this hospital, apart from all of them.
Heartification said...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 12:17 am:
Mar. 29, 2011 at 12:17 am:
i adored this ! i can't get enough of it !! plz add a new chapter soon ! ur such a talented author !!
Thank you!!!!!! I'm going to add a new chapter this week I swear!!! :D <3
Heartificationi just realized how pushy i must have sounded - sry . take ur time ! but yes - i have 2 admit - ur novel rlly does make the reader want 2 plunge deeper into the story .
really? you didn't sound pushy :) and thanks for the compliment ^-^
WoahallieeI love the Shiver series ! :)
When does the third book come out?! I can't wait till it does! ^-^
Harmony657
The third book, Forever, comes out July 12! By the way, your book is AMAZING :) Please post more!
PurpleWriterI LOVE this story SO much!!!!! Please add more to this story and Behind the Scars!! I also hope you check out mine when i finish it. It's called The Searcher's Ally.
thank you I'm glad you like my stories :D. I will be adding more chapters this week,last week the school's computers didn't let the chapters copy and paste last week but I think its working now...I would love to read your book, please tell me when its posted :D
Ok. I promise to tell you. Oops, I made a mistake in the title. It is actually called The Searcher's Allies.
Vam_apperatus_vampireLoved the story I wanna know what happens next. Please make more.
sparklylittlereddevilI love this story line~! Its so cool how you've gone with the Beauty and the Beast concept...I just love these kinds of stories. You can go so many ways with this.
The part when Misti hides from KC using her hair...TWILIGHT!! I'm sorry, but I just shouted that out loud when I read it. Maybe you should try something else there?
And I think you're a really talented poet. I love all your poems - they're so meaningful; I kinda want to save them on my PC. o(>v<)o
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lol thank you soooooo much!!!!! I didn't notice the hair thing was like bella's until now lol... The song thing I thought of when I was home alone and singing in the house, I thought, "what would Misti do if she's singing by herself and then realizes she's not alone?" so thats what I wrote. I'm sooooooooooo happy you like it so far, I'm happy to announce that I will be adding new chapters this weekend. :D
P.S. If you liked this you might want to check my other books... (more »)
AnyaLafayaaI do not want to tell you how to write your story, because it is yours. No matter what I say, you need to do what you feel is right for the novel. But, if you so insist, my opinion is that you should not switch to KC's point of view. I think it is difficult to write in a guy's point of view, and although I do an alright job at it, it does not truly portray what a real guy thinks. Besides, Misti is interesting enough that just because you keep with her perspective, it won't make you lose any fans... (more »)
:D thankyou!!!! I think I'll stick with Misti's perspective until the last few chapters.
Please check out my other book its called Behind The Scars. Both my friend and I wrote it and would like any critisizim.... Don't worry, I am still focusing on this story as well. :D please check it out Fiction-novels-most resent
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