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The Social Class Beast

January 6, 2011
By Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg


Summary:

Misti was sitting in class one day when KC walked in. He wore black and red, with make-up and piercings. He acted rude and self absorbed. But she never judged a book by the cover before... Forced to work on a class project together, the two teens slowly begin to understand each other and form a relationship.


Vanendra

The Social Class Beast


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on Feb. 19 2011 at 11:30 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Is this the end?!

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:58 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

I know but I had to make her life like that to lead up to the epic ending I thought of....Thankyou soooooooo much for reading my book ^-^ :D

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:54 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Wow. I just read chapter 4. Thats so terrible for her to go through. :( Good writing though!

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:45 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Lol,i meant to say anger in that last message -.- i need to learn to spell XD Hope you like the rest of the story! ^-^

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:42 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

You're welcome ^-^ thanks a million for reading it :D

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:36 am
Parantan BRONZE, Mars, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Giving up doesn't always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go.

Yay!!! Thx for sharing your story with all us readers.

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:25 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

lol im trying my bestest!!!! :) more chapters up by nxt wednesday

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:21 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Thankyou ^-^ but i didn't like the ninth chapter that much. And the chpter i'm currently trying to write doesn't flow too wellwith the story. :/ but imma keep writing til it sounds just right. :D

on Feb. 18 2011 at 11:38 am
sparkledreamer SILVER, Los Angeles, California
7 articles 5 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There's a lot of things you need to get across this universe. Warp drive... wormhole refractors... You know the thing you need most of all? You need a hand to hold." - The Doctor

So good. though the ninth chapter kinda reminded me of twilight but it is still good. Keep writing! :)

on Feb. 18 2011 at 9:33 am
Parantan BRONZE, Mars, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Giving up doesn't always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go.

Sadness Sadness to you not writing anymore of this story. Un-writer's block Zappity Zoo! :(

on Feb. 18 2011 at 8:58 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

new chapters are posted, sorry there aren't any more....I now have writer's block >.<

on Feb. 9 2011 at 8:41 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

lol, im going to add new chapters on friday. I rather add more chapters in a group so you can keep reading. I'm soooo happy you like my story so much.Thank you :D ^-^ <3

on Feb. 9 2011 at 7:34 am
Parantan BRONZE, Mars, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Giving up doesn't always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go.

Eeek! I keep re-reading it again and again because i'mm waiting for new chapters lol.

talk about the social life i have when the only thing i do is read stories online, haha.


on Feb. 8 2011 at 2:52 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Oh okay :D I'll comment as I go!

on Feb. 8 2011 at 12:32 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Thanks ^-^ her reaction will seem more realistic as you see that she has built in ager because of her home life.

on Feb. 8 2011 at 11:06 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

I'm reading this a chapter at at time, and it's really good so far :) Intriguing if a tiny bit unrealistic (her reaction seemed extreme, but I guess it could happen :P) Anway, I like it a lot :)

on Feb. 8 2011 at 8:48 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

I actually wrote a poem as an epilogue for this book and its sequel, i just didnt transfer it to my USB yet. I hate school computers -.- lol. I'll think of putting the epilogue in KC's perspective though thank you for the idea. :D ^-^ <3

on Feb. 7 2011 at 7:29 pm
sparkledreamer SILVER, Los Angeles, California
7 articles 5 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There's a lot of things you need to get across this universe. Warp drive... wormhole refractors... You know the thing you need most of all? You need a hand to hold." - The Doctor

I think you might want to do a chapter or an epilogue as to what KC was thinking however it is really good right now so continue writing and think about that for later on.

on Feb. 7 2011 at 9:01 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

I actually found a publishing company thats willing to publish my book despite my age!!!! ^-^ so this book will be coming out sometime next fall....I'll still be posting chapters on here though until I actually get a contract to read :D

on Feb. 7 2011 at 8:41 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

okay ^-^ thankyou soooooo much for the compliments....there will be a sequel to this book when I finish it I hope you enjoy! :D ^-^ <3


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