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The Social Class Beast

January 6, 2011
By Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg


Summary:

Misti was sitting in class one day when KC walked in. He wore black and red, with make-up and piercings. He acted rude and self absorbed. But she never judged a book by the cover before... Forced to work on a class project together, the two teens slowly begin to understand each other and form a relationship.


Vanendra

The Social Class Beast


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on Mar. 17 2011 at 12:11 am
Vam_apperatus_vampire, Petaluma, California
0 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never give up on your dreams even if it seems like you should.

Loved the story I wanna know what happens next. Please make more.

on Mar. 16 2011 at 8:41 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Yay!!!! The new chapter is posted!!!! ^-^

on Mar. 12 2011 at 5:05 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Nevermind, my week was ruined. I read the end of Catching Fire and couldn't stop crying today. I heard that Mockingjay is even sadder. Guess I should stock up on tissues before reading it then. :P

on Mar. 10 2011 at 9:59 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
8 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

Haha That's so great!  =D

on Mar. 10 2011 at 8:49 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

This week is wayy better for me XD

on Mar. 10 2011 at 8:48 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

lol thank you soooooo much!!!!! I didn't notice the hair thing was like bella's until now lol... The song thing I thought of when I was home alone and singing in the house, I thought, "what would Misti do if she's singing by herself and then realizes she's not alone?" so thats what I wrote. I'm sooooooooooo happy you like it so far, I'm happy to announce that I will be adding new chapters this weekend. :D

 

P.S.  If you liked this you might want to check my other books. ^-^ Behind The Scars or The Rise Of Vanendra can be found within the first 15 pages of the 'most recent' part of the 'novels' section. I hope you check them out :D


on Mar. 10 2011 at 7:48 am
sparklylittlereddevil SILVER, Jyoyo, Other
7 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Logic will get you from A to B. Imagination will take you everywhere.

I love this story line~! Its so cool how you've gone with the Beauty and the Beast concept...I just love these kinds of stories. You can go so many ways with this.

The part when Misti hides from KC using her hair...TWILIGHT!! I'm sorry, but I just shouted that out loud when I read it. Maybe you should try something else there?

And I think you're a really talented poet. I love all your poems - they're so meaningful; I kinda want to save them on my PC. o(>v<)o

I agree with AnyaLafayaa and think its a bit too early to switch to KC's point of view. Maybe she should get to know him a bit better? And I absolutely LOVE the scene where they're singing in the auditorium! *DIE OF HEART THROB*

I love where this is going!! Post more~~~!! (>v<)


on Mar. 10 2011 at 5:43 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Yay the fixed chapters are posted ^-^

on Mar. 1 2011 at 6:57 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

No problem, thanks for commenting!

on Mar. 1 2011 at 6:54 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

but in the mean time you could check out my new book as you wait. my friend and i wrote it together.... Its called Behind The Scars   please read and comment Fiction--novels--most resent--page one or two... Thank you!!!

on Mar. 1 2011 at 6:20 pm
PrincessSparkleStar BRONZE, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 36 comments

Great! I'm glad I was able to help!

Yes! I can't WAIT for this weekend;)


AnyaLafayaa said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 5:42 pm
AnyaLafayaa, New Freedom, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your heart or burn down your house, you can never tell.


























-Joan Crawford

Okay, good idea. Thanks for listening!

on Mar. 1 2011 at 5:40 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

:D thankyou!!!! I think I'll stick with Misti's perspective until the last few chapters.

AnyaLafayaa said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 2:43 pm
AnyaLafayaa, New Freedom, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your heart or burn down your house, you can never tell.


























-Joan Crawford

I do not want to tell you how to write your story, because it is yours. No matter what I say, you need to do what you feel is right for the novel. But, if you so insist, my opinion is that you should not switch to KC's point of view. I think it is difficult to write in a guy's point of view, and although I do an alright job at it, it does not truly portray what a real guy thinks. Besides, Misti is interesting enough that just because you keep with her perspective, it won't make you lose any fans. Just do what you like, and keep it interesting, as you do!

on Mar. 1 2011 at 10:51 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Please check out my other book its called  Behind The Scars. Both my friend and I wrote it and would like any critisizim.... Don't worry, I am still focusing on this story as well. :D please check it out Fiction-novels-most resent

on Feb. 28 2011 at 6:55 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Thanks for saying that, I think I know where I can go with this story now ^-^ thank you for your comment!!!! :D

on Feb. 28 2011 at 6:52 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Thanks for commenting! Yes I did create the poems :D I'm glad you liked them.... I have a few questions for you, Should I switch to KC's POV? And, what do you think I can improve on?

on Feb. 28 2011 at 6:47 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

I hope to post more chapters by the weekend

on Feb. 28 2011 at 6:44 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Thankyou!!!!  I understand what you mean about why they are angry to be partnered with eachother. Please understand that this is a rough draft. Thank you for pointing out  how I should make KC seem even more rude before the get partnered. hat took me out of my writer's block. ^-^ thank you!!!!!

on Feb. 28 2011 at 6:44 pm
PrincessSparkleStar BRONZE, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 36 comments
oops i typed it twice...


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