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The Social Class Beast

January 6, 2011
By Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg


Summary:

Misti was sitting in class one day when KC walked in. He wore black and red, with make-up and piercings. He acted rude and self absorbed. But she never judged a book by the cover before... Forced to work on a class project together, the two teens slowly begin to understand each other and form a relationship.


Vanendra

The Social Class Beast


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on Feb. 21 2011 at 2:37 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Thankyou...I didn't think capter nine went with the story either, any suggestions on how I  could fix it?

on Feb. 21 2011 at 2:21 pm
CrazyWriter GOLD, Lorton Station, Virginia
16 articles 2 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once you have given up on the most important thing in your life, you begin to die, because then, you gradually lose your true self"~Hana Kimi
"Someone who can lie to themself. . . is lonely, and in pain"~Hana Kimi

I think you have a book that could be published here..... I would like  you to post more quickly but take your time at the same time. This is great it has a goood plot sso far and the characters seem to be forming greatly. you have a surprise in everychapter which keeps everyone hookeed keep it up but dont hurry yourself too far. oh and chaptter nine is just alittle  off in flowingness but otherwise i have no compliants.

~CrAzYWrITeR~


on Feb. 21 2011 at 12:08 am
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
8 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

Ohhh.  Okay.  Welll I can't wait .  Haha It's one of my favorites.

on Feb. 20 2011 at 9:16 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

thankyou I'm glad you can connect to it some way ^-^

on Feb. 20 2011 at 9:13 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

actually the third book doesnt come out until this spring...It's called Forever.

on Feb. 20 2011 at 8:52 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
8 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

I can't wait to read the next chapters!  =]

And wait- there's a third one out already??  I've only read the first two.  A trip to the bookstore is in order.  Haha


on Feb. 20 2011 at 8:02 pm
drmstarlet21 GOLD, Matthews, North Carolina
13 articles 0 photos 76 comments
This is great! I love it. My school's all-school musical this year is Beauty and the Beast, and I am in the chorus, so it really connected with me. I can't wait to see where you go with it!

on Feb. 20 2011 at 6:15 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

ld love any criticism and advice that you have please tell me. :D

on Feb. 20 2011 at 1:25 pm
sparkledreamer SILVER, Los Angeles, California
7 articles 5 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There's a lot of things you need to get across this universe. Warp drive... wormhole refractors... You know the thing you need most of all? You need a hand to hold." - The Doctor

If you would like any criticism or advice I'd be happy to help. Now you should just keep trying

on Feb. 20 2011 at 9:05 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Oh okay :) I'll keep reading for sure :)

on Feb. 20 2011 at 7:36 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

trilogy* -excuse my spelling errors please lol XD

on Feb. 20 2011 at 7:35 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

the last poem/ chapter I posted is the epilouge to this book. i put it there for those people wo like to look at the last page of a book before reading it. i wont b switching perspectives until the last few chapter of this story... There's a huge reason why......I'll add more chapters on wednesday. Hope you continue to read this book ^-^

on Feb. 20 2011 at 7:27 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Thankyou soooo much, i will post more chapters on wednesday!!!! ^-^ :D

 

P.S. have you read the Shiver trilog yet?


on Feb. 19 2011 at 11:08 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
8 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

Wow.  This book got me hooked immediately. 

I think the plot seems really great so far.  There are tons of places the story could go, and I'm so excited to see what's next.  Don't stop writing (please)! =]

I love the little poems you put in the chapters.  Some of the chapters, though, seem really short.  (But maybe that's just me complaining because I want to read more. :P) 

Five stars!

P.S.  I love Maggie Stiefvater! =D


on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:34 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

I'm a little confused - are you switching perspectives in the middle of the book? I can see this last chapter being the beginning or end... :P

on Feb. 19 2011 at 4:14 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

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on Feb. 19 2011 at 4:14 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

nofrillsbuffalo

on Feb. 19 2011 at 4:11 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

well my english teacher owns the company so I know its not a scam. he said that so far my storyis pretty good but should finish thebook before submitting it.... I think the company is called Nofrillsbuffalo the website address is as follows.(because editors of this website wont let me add a link)...

on Feb. 19 2011 at 4:03 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

lol, nope not yet...I just put the epilouge in for the ppl who want to get a glimpse at the ending.

on Feb. 19 2011 at 2:12 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1754 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

What publishing company?  What did they say?

 

Sorry, it's just that, I want to make sure it's not a scam--there are too many of those nowadays. =\ Publishing companies don't just contact people about their books unless it's a set-up like inkpop, which is run by HarperCollins.  The way it goes is the author contacts an agent/agents with query letters about their books.  They usually get numerous rejections, but if an agent likes the sound of their query letter, they might request a sample of the book.  If they still like it, they'll probably take you on.  Then the agent goes from there--contacting publishers and working on deals.  But publishing companies almost never just contact someone out of the blue.

 

Sorry about the mini-rant. Haha. You can just read the first two questions. =P



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