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You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:18 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u so much:)

I'm sure u have great talent too!

on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:17 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I'm glad:)

Yeppers I'll def take a look:)

on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:16 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx:)

Ya sadly it happens too often...

on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:15 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u thank u:):)

Yes ofcoarse i"ll def check out ur stuff!

justbe-3 said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 6:07 pm
justbe-3, Hollis, New Hampshire
0 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You live but once, you might as well be amusing." -Coco Chanel
"Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you're alive, it isn't." -Richard Bach
"Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love." -Einstein

i love it! i wish it was longer though. your a great author.

on Mar. 20 2010 at 11:23 am
pieluver BRONZE, Blountsville, Alabama
1 article 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The silence isn't so bad till I look at my hand and feel sad cause the spaces between my fingers are were urs fit perfectly."

Okay so I submitted my poem it is called summer girl. Hope u like it.

zack1069 GOLD said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 11:30 pm
zack1069 GOLD, Loveland, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 2 comments
i like it its really simple but good

TylerC said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 8:45 am
TylerC, South Plainfield, New Jersey
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
\"Chuck Norris doesn\'t get wet, water gets Chuck Norris.\"

this is actually pretty good

on Mar. 10 2010 at 10:40 pm
Katiebrox3 BRONZE, Cape Coral, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
We loved with a love that was more than love. - Edgar Allan Poe

I really like this, it describes me and my old friend right now. Keep writing, your really good. <3

Griffin SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 8:31 pm
Griffin SILVER, San Bernadino, California
8 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm sorry to be the one to inform you, but your child is on crack."

this is really good and i really like it. i think everyone can relate

on Mar. 10 2010 at 1:48 pm
raychell.faith GOLD, Somewhere You Left Your Heart, California
12 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You Risk Tears If You Let Yourself Be Tamed;" The Little Prince

very sweet & sad. we can all relate to the changes and goodbyes that happen over summertime. <3

on Mar. 9 2010 at 8:01 am
softlylara BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
4 articles 2 photos 15 comments
when i read your poem i imediately assumed it was about an ex boy friend or old crush untill i read your quote about it and relized it was about old friends who changed ... i thought your poem was amazing and like how it can really relate to either ... great job ... keep writingg !!!!!

on Mar. 8 2010 at 4:56 pm
respecturself7 SILVER, Medina, New York
8 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is a natural law in life to settle.....I broke that law ~Katherine Hepburn
Love, Is the severest of mental diseases~U.K.
Spinning always spinning....when life puts me down I'll give you a call~respecturself7

I love this poem! You have talent!

on Mar. 5 2010 at 8:23 pm
GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is but a number

hey that was. i really felt what you were talking about. would you mind taking a look at some of my work?

on Mar. 5 2010 at 4:35 pm
JustWriting BRONZE, Sao Paulo, Other
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Really good! I loved it.

I know exactly what you mean.

this has happened to me more than once!

Saidah. GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 3:12 pm
Saidah. GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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Omg, this poem is really niceee,

I really enjoyed readinqq it.

You shud check outt some of mhy pieaces,

Hopee you injoy them.??

on Mar. 4 2010 at 2:08 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx ya everyone keeps tellin me it's not a sonnet but there rly isn't anything i can do about it now...so atleast u think its good lol =P

on Mar. 4 2010 at 2:07 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx:) I'm sure u could n prolly alrdy have:)

on Mar. 4 2010 at 2:06 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Oh wow thank you sooo much:) that's such a compliment! I hope to see it in a book one day:)

Wolfayne said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 12:01 pm
It makes a good poem, I admit. However, It isn't exactly a true sonnet.

Sonnets have 4 stanzas, the first 3 of which have 4 lines each, and the 4th of which has only 2 lines. it goes in the abab,cdcd, efef, gg rhyme sceme. AND each line is supposed to have 10 syllables.

I'm not saying it isn't good, just that it's not exactly a sonnet.

Please look at my poetry and story! Thanx! ;D