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Try Not To Die

December 8, 2012
By Anonymous

I know that,
We belong to two different worlds,
And I know that,
I'm not the girl that you deserve,

I love you so much,
More than you'll ever know,
But I'm not the one you need,
So I guess you should go,

Go away,
Before I change my mind,
Go away,
Before I start crying,

But...

Before you go,
Please give me a smile,
For the last time,
Hold me tight,
Without any tears,
Say 'Goodbye',
Maybe this will help,
Or maybe not but I'll try,

I'll try not to cry,
And I'll try not to die...!!!

I'm trying to be tough,
I'm trying to be strong,
But I can't help thinking,
'This life's too long',

I can't spend,
Even a day without you,
How will I survive?
I don't have a clue,

Go away,
Before I go weak,
Go away,
Before the real me starts to speak,

But...

Before you go,
Please give me a smile,
For the last time,
Hold me tight,
Without any tears,
Say 'Goodbye',
Maybe this will help,
Or maybe not but I'll try,

I'll try not to cry,
And I'll try not to die...!!!

Don't worry about me,
Care about yourself,
I'll forget all about you,
I'll forget all that I felt,

So go away,
I won't cry,
And even if I cry,
Someday my tears will dry,

But...

Before you go,
Please give me a smile,
For the last time,
Hold me tight,
Without any tears,
Say 'Goodbye',
Maybe this will help,
Or maybe not but I'll try,

I'll try not to cry,
And I'll try not to die...!!!


The author's comments:
It's about a girl who wants her love to go away because she knows that she is not the right girl for him...!!!

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on Nov. 5 2013 at 9:23 am
KaylaaLovee GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
14 articles 1 photo 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imperfection is beauty. Madness is genius. And its better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring. And when it comes down to it, I let them think what they want. If they care enough to bother with what I do, I'm already better than them."

This poem is so well written. It has soooo much depth and really shows good exspression.

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Aug. 13 2013 at 7:16 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

You can check out my other works here TeenInk.com/users/Zoya_Khan

on Aug. 6 2013 at 6:39 pm
BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM, Manchester, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things. The good things don't always soften the bad things, but vice versa, the bad things don't necessarily spoil the good things or make them unimportant. -The Doctor

Wow! This song made me speechless. For the most part, it's because I can really connect with it right now.. And it opened up  my eyes to a guy that I am in love with. His name is Ryan and I love him, but his feelings towards me are complicated and the whole situation is complicated.. And I told him to go and to forget me, since I was moving, but he said he will miss me dearly, and it touched my heart to hear that but thinking about it now, it hurts, and only makes me want to cry because of all our memories... But great piece, and I would love to hear more from you. Keep me updated when you post more on here.

on Aug. 4 2013 at 5:29 pm
RollerDerbyRocker PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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omg this is how i feel about the guy i lke

on May. 10 2013 at 11:47 am
AmericaBeauty, Beebe, Arkansas
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This is how i feel about the guy im crazy abou(:

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Mar. 15 2013 at 10:12 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

Thanks :) :) :)

Prateek said...
on Mar. 14 2013 at 12:44 pm
Prateek, Stephenville, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
there is nothing called impossible

well  i know the real pain when someone leaves you ,,,you really touched my heart via your lines ,,, i am so touched ,,hatsoff and best of luck for your fututre

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2013 at 4:41 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

Thank u so much!!!

_Kiran_ said...
on Jan. 19 2013 at 10:13 am
_Kiran_, Gujranwala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Faith is taking the first step even when you don't see the whole staircase.
Martin Luther King, Jr.

it is heart touching i really like this song but it is very difficult to live without him. . .REALLY VERY NICE:)  

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2013 at 8:34 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

Thanks :) :) :)

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2013 at 8:33 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
19 articles 0 photos 420 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

Thanks :) :) :)

on Jan. 13 2013 at 8:31 am
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

nice job i like the feelins u put into it

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2013 at 8:31 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

Thanks :) :) :)

on Jan. 13 2013 at 8:31 am
loveshersheys, Lahore, Other
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It's a very touching poem! I really like it!

on Jan. 13 2013 at 8:29 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

truly reflects the feelings of a girl. nicely written

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2013 at 4:56 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

Thanks u sooo much :) :) :)

on Jan. 11 2013 at 4:53 am
WolfWest13 SILVER, Kalimpong, Other
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The fire of sacrifice shall make your love ever more pure as it does to gold.

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2013 at 5:10 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

Thank u :) :) :)

on Jan. 4 2013 at 12:09 pm
MonsterGirl2000 SILVER, Des Moines, New Mexico
9 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
When it seems like there’s no one left to run to in this empty world you can come to me I’ll be your shooting star. You can tell me your dreams I can’t promise to make them come true, but I’ll be there to pick up the pieces of your broken heart if your dreams happen to fall through…Unknown

love it!!!

Abeera said...
on Jan. 1 2013 at 1:12 am
Abeera, Gujranwala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
زندگی تیرے تعاقب میں لوگ ۔
اتنا چلتے ہیں کہ مر جاتے ہیں ۔

i love them too,and its touching miss thanks...