Redemption | Teen Ink


December 28, 2009
By VanessaT. SILVER, Inver Grove Heights, Minnesota
VanessaT. SILVER, Inver Grove Heights, Minnesota
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You’re higher in spirit.
And I look up to you in memory
But down to you in a physical technicality
I need you more than ever
You’ll always remain my never
I look at your body laying in the casket
It’s not you anymore
But your body in a trash can
You see I’ll always be who I am
Just a little less
And don’t you take seize of me, don’t test
The limits of my power
The man who did this I will devour
Into tiny little pieces and his friends and family will be
The ones who I will torment hour after hour
My friend here you are, at best
With the knife still in your chest
Don’t you worry I’ll be your redemption
With the one and only exception
That the man who did this to you
Will the feel the pain that I knew.

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Milo! said...
on Mar. 13 2010 at 8:16 am
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