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Our Love

September 13, 2009
By angel11 PLATINUM, Co Spgs, Colorado
angel11 PLATINUM, Co Spgs, Colorado
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The smile burns through the inch of thick ice
It thaws my heart but for what price?

When you throw back your head and chuckle your smile
How long will it be till you leave, a while?

If you need me right now, i'll need you forever
So this isn't one night, its a commitment, an endeavor

If you take my hand then don't let it go
Because if you look back you wont see my bright glow

Love or leave me but don't sing a fake song
My heart's just to fragile and life's not that long

So when you look in my eyes and we feel the same way
This love is everlasting not just one day



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on Nov. 4 2015 at 1:04 pm
laineyirwin04 BRONZE, White Castle, Louisiana
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This is a truly beautiful poem. This poem is not only relatable, but also says that the love between two people should last forever. The last line, “So when you look in my eyes and we feel the same way. This love is everlasting not just one day” is the strongest line in the poem because every single person knows what it feels like to love or to be loved.

on Jul. 12 2011 at 7:31 am
WeOwnTheNight-Xxx, Unknown, Other
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Honey, If Your Gonna Be Two Faced, At Least Make one Of Them Pretty >>xxxx

So pretty >>xx

on Mar. 27 2011 at 11:42 am
XxTickleM3EmoxX PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
L.Why is everyone O. trying to find it? V. Maybe it's hidden for a reason...E.

If you look in the mirror and dont like what you see, you might find out first hand what its like to be me...

i loooove this! great job! its my favorite! lawl

on Feb. 9 2011 at 6:00 pm
wackiewack BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.

this poem is truely beautiful ♥


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