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Crush

August 26, 2009
By Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)


I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)


The author's comments:
This song i wrote is very special to me :)

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on Sep. 28 at 12:54 pm
Babyunicorn2698, Highland, Indiana
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This is amazing and for me it is so true.

newteenboi said...
on Aug. 21 at 10:37 am
newteenboi, Moore, Oklahoma
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I love this!

on Dec. 13 2019 at 12:00 pm
Goku_Nativeson, Ogema, Minnesota
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great!!!! 😁

Lil_Rune1234 said...
on Dec. 7 2019 at 6:36 pm
Lil_Rune1234, Sisters, Oregon
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Whoa, this is so true!!!!!❤❤

sara_7 said...
on Apr. 18 2019 at 8:46 am
sara_7, Victoria, Other
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Favorite Quote:
LEARN from yesterday, LIVE for today, HOPE for tomorrow.

WOW!!!!!! you have a lot of talent i want to hear more poems. this was the best first time i heared something like this. AMAZING !!!!

Babigurl06 said...
on Oct. 30 2018 at 9:41 am
Babigurl06, Midlothian, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
“Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.” By Tzu

That's how I fell about my crush

on Sep. 20 2018 at 8:38 pm
Dani_Higareda GOLD, Hanahan, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
“People say nothing is impossible, but I do nothing every day.”
- Winnie the Pooh

WOW! AMAZING!!!

14830 said...
on Sep. 20 2018 at 2:08 pm
14830, Paragould, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
I believe in God, and I am an animal person (:

This is beautiful!!!!!

on Apr. 13 2018 at 8:04 am
Rhiannon_4 DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
72 articles 87 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both.
- Native American proverb

Do not go gentle into that good night but rage, rage against the dying of the light.
- Dylan Thomas

What is past is past -- it is the present and the future that concern us.
- Hiawatha, founder of the Iroquois Confederacy

This is great, keep writing! Please check out my songs and vote for them!

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2016 at 11:55 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

Hey, I don't have music for it. I can't play an instrument but that's very interesting. I'd love to hear it to music.

on Jun. 25 2015 at 5:53 pm
Kayla Thompson, Seymour, Indiana
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I really like your song my name is Kayla and my dad owns a recording studio ... if there is more to this song I would love to hear it

Caroline said...
on Jun. 21 2015 at 4:34 pm
I really like the way you've drawn on your own life experiences, especially being of a similar age, to really try to imagine what life was like for Anne Frank. A very profound comment at the end. How very true!

on May. 22 2014 at 2:21 pm
katie grooms BRONZE, Pocahontas Ar, Arkansas
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This song is gr8 it really speaks to me. it  reminds me of my breakup. and how things are now. but it tells me that i shouldnt be so sad

lake33 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2013 at 1:02 pm
lake33 BRONZE, Uniontown, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"You want something? go get it!"

Who ever reads this, please check out my poems. I need your opinions!

on Oct. 30 2012 at 10:11 am
hnabanana SILVER, Urbandale, Iowa
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this is actually okay, can you check out my work? i have songs on there and need to have some opinion! not promising it'll be good though :) or not as good as this ;)

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2012 at 9:21 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

Haha thanks. If you view my songs the song "precious" is the continuation

nanna said...
on Jun. 20 2012 at 12:02 pm
nice song its like me

on May. 22 2012 at 2:08 pm
-youngbrownpoet-, Cheyenne, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
"You're the only one who can make the difference. Whatever your dream is, go for it." - Earvin "Magic" Johnson

This is exactly how I feel towards a girl! Well, what you have so far anyway...Keep on writing bud.

on Mar. 2 2012 at 1:14 pm
scottchb47 BRONZE, Flushing, New York
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whats the point of the continuation?

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 1:43 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

pop/ rock or something