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Crush

August 26, 2009
By Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)


I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)


The author's comments:
This song i wrote is very special to me :)

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on May. 22 2012 at 2:08 pm
-youngbrownpoet-, Cheyenne, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
"You're the only one who can make the difference. Whatever your dream is, go for it." - Earvin "Magic" Johnson

This is exactly how I feel towards a girl! Well, what you have so far anyway...Keep on writing bud.

on Mar. 2 2012 at 1:14 pm
scottchb47 BRONZE, Flushing, New York
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whats the point of the continuation?

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 1:43 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

pop/ rock or something

on Jan. 18 2012 at 2:52 pm
NGGuerrette GOLD, Litchfield, New Hampshire
11 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
If the world is one thing, and we are another then we should entitle ourselves into that, because it is the law that resides in our heart to go forth and to examine the rest of us… -Myself

What genre of music does this fall under?

on Dec. 5 2011 at 10:50 am
Kparker27 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
30 articles 17 photos 101 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end, it's still best to wait for the one we want rather than settle for what's available. It's still best to wait for the one you love rather than to settle for the one who's around. It's still best to wait for the right person, because life's too short to waste on the wrong one."

Thart's what I was thinking....lol

Racquel reid said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 9:53 am
Racquel reid, Wakegaun, Illinois
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your stupid

Racquel reid said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 9:53 am
Racquel reid, Wakegaun, Illinois
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yea ahhahahahha

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Sep. 23 2011 at 6:25 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks love <3 :)

Mrs.parez said...
on Sep. 22 2011 at 1:48 pm
this is a great poem or story its very true

on Sep. 9 2011 at 8:58 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
4 articles 5 photos 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

and* typo 

on Sep. 9 2011 at 8:57 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
4 articles 5 photos 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

np abd thanks!

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Sep. 9 2011 at 3:50 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

omg that sucks :( good luck though!!! and thanks

on Sep. 8 2011 at 8:26 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
4 articles 5 photos 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

I really like the start of this song! I know how you feel, although my crush is my friend, but he doesn't like me that way.

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2011 at 2:39 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks. precious* is the continuation if u want to read the rest

liberianbadd said...
on Sep. 8 2011 at 12:35 pm
this is sooo guud, i really enjoyed reading it, and its is so true

on Aug. 31 2011 at 8:26 am
BeccaMarie BRONZE, Florida
1 article 2 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"just be yourself, there is no one better."
~ Taylor Swift

... somebodys got bieber fever... ;)

on Aug. 17 2011 at 8:34 pm
ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
21 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
Love Always. :)
When the tides of life turn against you and the current upsets your boat, don't waste time and tears on what might have been, just lie on your back and float.

Good job, I'm off to find the rest of the song to read! Keep up the good work! Check out some of my work if you have time! Happy writing! :)

aysh.panji said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 9:32 am
this is one of the best songs better then any real singer .thnx.ill see the rest l8er.

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Apr. 30 2011 at 10:50 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

i did post the whole song in another called "precious crush"

on Apr. 29 2011 at 6:14 pm
ummmmm...i dont really like this. i dont see why its #1. maybe if you post the whole song...