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Decrepitude

March 4, 2014
By TheDolphin ELITE, Iloilo, Other
TheDolphin ELITE, Iloilo, Other
210 articles 11 photos 51 comments

Roads stretch along her
forehead. Her skin withers like
roses. Time rusts gold.



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on Mar. 12 2014 at 11:05 pm
LuckyLuis BRONZE, None, Other
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i really adore the use of imagery.... using only few words, you made a great poem!!!!

on Mar. 12 2014 at 10:52 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

I love this a lot :3 KEEP WRITING!!

on Mar. 12 2014 at 10:48 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

This is really pretty! Love it XD

on Mar. 12 2014 at 3:46 am
Promethean SILVER, Kanpur, Other
8 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
An eye for an eye will make the whole world blind....

Finally got the meaning. haha It is cool. 

on Mar. 12 2014 at 3:43 am
TheDolphin ELITE, Iloilo, Other
210 articles 11 photos 51 comments
thank you!

on Mar. 11 2014 at 9:08 am
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

Wow, what a beautifully written haiku! I especially loved the second line "Her skin withers like roses." 5/5 stars