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I Am the Song

April 14, 2013
By LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...”
― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You'll Go!


I'm that line of song
You knew you wanted in
But second-guessed yourself

So,

I wander in search
Of another poet
Who will sing me to Sleep.


The author's comments:
Wanted then unwanted, then the cycle repeats. Who will forever stay with me?

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on May. 29 2013 at 1:28 am
EmmettHerculeLaFave SILVER, Tucson, Arizona
8 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We have it in our power to begin the world over again." -Thomas Paine

My feels...

on Apr. 30 2013 at 6:36 pm
davidnolan BRONZE, Manchester, Vermont
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments
Very good...I just like the whole metaphor you're using!

on Apr. 29 2013 at 10:24 am
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

so true i know how ya feel i dont even kno any more........ dont even kno how to trust people anymore...

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 22 2013 at 7:12 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I think this is everyone on this site. You describe human wanting well.

on Apr. 21 2013 at 7:54 pm
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
10 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

ur a really awsome writer u have talent :) keep up the amazing work!

on Apr. 21 2013 at 7:25 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
LOOK AT MY PROFILE. DO IT.

You are such a great writer! I'd read your stuff anytime! Keep up the amazing work! =D

on Apr. 21 2013 at 8:19 am
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here is a small fact: You are going to die." ~The Book Thief
"You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self." ~Mikey Pasterik

very, very good. i love it. great job!! five stars, no doubt about it! 

swat17 SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2013 at 10:55 pm
swat17 SILVER, Mineral, Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 34 comments
I don't read haikus on here a lot, but I'm glad I read this one; great job! I love how you connected two of them together. 5/5 from me

on Apr. 19 2013 at 5:48 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

nice idea real nice

on Apr. 18 2013 at 11:33 pm
PriyaModi BRONZE, Indore, Other
1 article 7 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
I like the way i am,need no transformation,,,LOVE LIFE.

nice thought Lia.. :)

on Apr. 18 2013 at 11:08 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

This made me think, and I really like it! Bang up job XD

on Apr. 18 2013 at 9:18 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

That was really sad... And the metaphors were interesting! And Lira, you don't always need a poet to be happy! Become a beautiful song yourself! And not just lines in other people's songs. Good job :)