Love Poem

September 9, 2009
By , Union City, TN
She loves him,
And he loves her,
Their love is never a mix,
It is but a stir.

They look good together,
They are a perfect couple,
They are each othershalf,That means they are double.

The love they hold for each other,
Might not ever end,
Which mean their love,
Will only extend.

Caring for each other,
Is the most important thing,
We all know how much they care,
So we know it's not a fling.

They love each other,
They really do,
All they say,
Is I Love You.

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bastillewriter said...
Jan. 18, 2015 at 1:19 pm
I don't like this poem. The rhymes seem forced and there are no surprises. Also, the whole "true love" thing isn't that easy in real life, honey. Don't criticize me for sharing my opinion.
dgeileenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 13, 2014 at 9:43 pm
I love this line: 'Their love is never a mix, It is but a stir."
lovefortodaynottomrrow said...
Oct. 7, 2013 at 11:13 am
i don't either
nelehjr This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2013 at 12:45 pm
Um...I don't think that was a hiaku...
lovefortodaynottomrrow replied...
Oct. 7, 2013 at 11:13 am
idon't either  
The_Quiet_Girl said...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 6:26 pm
Lovely, touching, and eloquent. I love this poem; I would like to check out more of your work, but you posted as "anonymous"....Oh, well; just keep writing! Don't let a talent such as yours slip away.
Ranea said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 7:56 pm
i loved it!!!!!!!!!! i really connected with it and wish all live was more like that, but oh well. keep up the great work and keep writing
Ranea replied...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 7:57 pm
iment love not live--- sorry
Doves_and_Ravens said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 3:41 pm
This really made me feel like had just read Shakespeare but I could understand it. Lovely work. Please, keep writing!
carlya14 said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 6:03 pm
love it! it's just...great! :)
Amberocks:) said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 4:44 pm

this is a cute story

it is true to

the cutest part is

the "I LOVE YOU"

LuVR GuRl replied...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 4:48 pm
well sweety love doesn't exist but i respect of the fact that u believe in it.
Amberocks:) replied...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 4:51 pm
just because u dont have love doesnt mean you have to ruin love for every1 else
A_Braden said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 11:23 am
Great poem, only thing i have to say is keep writing and make any poem you do a little longer.
Kerra said...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 6:07 pm
when i read your poem i just fell in love with it...I REALLY LIKE IT!!!!!!
Makaila. said...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 3:00 pm
I love it! It reminds me of my mother and soon-to-be father. No, not remind. It is the perfect discription! Thank you and keep writing. 
thedreamer said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 6:25 pm
very cute and sweet:)
meghan1214 said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:33 pm
i really love the poem but its under haiku and its not a haiku but any ways its really nice
Purple_Plumberry replied...
Sept. 5, 2012 at 9:54 pm
I was thinking the same thing. This poem doesn't follow the 5, 7, 5 syllable rule. Still an interesting love poem.
Melissa G. said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:51 pm
I really love this poem so much. It moves me like I'm on waves. Your poems is very good and I hope you will write more I would really love to read them. Good luck! 
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