Love Poem

September 9, 2009
By Anonymous

She loves him,
And he loves her,
Their love is never a mix,
It is but a stir.

They look good together,
They are a perfect couple,
They are each othershalf,That means they are double.

The love they hold for each other,
Might not ever end,
Which mean their love,
Will only extend.

Caring for each other,
Is the most important thing,
We all know how much they care,
So we know it's not a fling.

They love each other,
They really do,
All they say,
Is I Love You.


The author's comments:
Mii poem is dealing about love.

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meghan1214 said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 1:33 pm
i really love the poem but its under haiku and its not a haiku but any ways its really nice

lollypops GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2011 at 2:24 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Live

this is really good not a hakiu more of a limirck or ballad but amazing good job

on Mar. 27 2011 at 12:49 am
booklover104 BRONZE, Stockton, California
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Favorite Quote:
I have a couple of quotes i like... \"Success is not a doorway it\'s a staircase\"
2. \"Everything happens for a reason\"
3.\"Your worth consists in what you are and not in what you have\"-Thomas Edison

Great poem it was amazing!!!! love thea art, but like everyone said, it is not a haiku... beautiful though!!! =)

 


on Feb. 10 2011 at 2:51 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
I really love this poem so much. It moves me like I'm on waves. Your poems is very good and I hope you will write more I would really love to read them. Good luck! 

steven said...
on Jan. 20 2011 at 9:56 pm
a truly diverse poem, wonderful

on Dec. 20 2010 at 7:15 pm
Ashmarie PLATINUM, Oskaloosa, Kansas
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I loved this poem and the way when you read it, it sounds completely natural(:

11MaTa said...
on Dec. 14 2010 at 3:20 pm
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! But why is it rated 10 ????

HuntressEmma said...
on Nov. 23 2010 at 7:32 pm
So interesting, So inspiring, Yet not a haiku. See if you can alter it to make it a haiku, and try again.

on Nov. 15 2010 at 10:13 pm
CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
21 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. ~Mark Twain

Its a great poem but not  a haiku

VitaLoyal GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 3:03 pm
VitaLoyal GOLD, Warrrenville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
IAM SOMEBODY BECUZ EVERYONE IS SOMEBODY.love is a state of mind

like it so much

on Nov. 15 2010 at 10:36 am
DragonMaster66.6 BRONZE, Washougal, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and hear the lamentations of their women" -Conan the Barbarian-

I don't quite understand how this is a haiku, but it's very sweet and tickles my soul. This is just lovely, aside from the fact that it's in the haiku category and not a haiku, but that's okay.

on Aug. 19 2010 at 6:27 pm
avantgarde GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
I write for the same reason I breathe...because if I didn't I would die. --Isaac Asimov

It's lovely, but it's not a haiku.

on Aug. 19 2010 at 3:00 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

how is this a haiku?

on Aug. 19 2010 at 1:06 am
TheCreativeMiller SILVER, Mississauga, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Vi Veri Veniversum Vivus Vici
[By the power of truth, I, while living, hαve conquered the universe] - V for Vendetta Movie

"Carpe diem, carpe noctem, carpe vitam." [Seize the day, seize the night, seize life.]

This is amazing! Keep up the good work!

on Jul. 6 2010 at 3:59 pm
Hippiechick10 SILVER, One Stoplight Town, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Those who deny freedom to others , deserve it not for themselves. (Abe Lincoln)

Awesome! Very meaningful!

on Jun. 4 2010 at 6:24 pm
jesseay09 SILVER, Palm Bay, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and say what you feel.... Because those that matter... don't mind... And those that mind... don't matter.

This is very nice !!! :)

A.R.J.T said...
on May. 6 2010 at 1:27 pm
cute:D i like it

on May. 1 2010 at 8:49 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

I'm agreeing w/ u there!

-Rose


on May. 1 2010 at 12:27 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

aww i really luvv this. itz so cute & meaningful(: i agree wit  princess4ever. keep up the amazing work!

on May. 1 2010 at 4:19 am
princess4ever BRONZE, Tripoli, Other
1 article 23 photos 74 comments
This is one of my favorite poems so far!!!!!!! I lova it!! thank u so much!




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