Through My WIndow | Teen Ink

Through My WIndow

January 18, 2016
By Anonymous

I was young,
8 years old sitting in my house
watching the rain roll down the window.
I remember the distorted image of the driveway,
old car rolling down it,
and little did I know that tomorrow,
the cold rain would become tears,
the window -- my cheek,
the driveway -- my memories.
It was the last time I would see him.

What I wish I saw
on that spring morning
was the bird -- not the car
on the pavement
but the good, the bird.
Through the rain it sung,
speaking to me.
Telling the joy and telling the happiness
through ears to heart.
When the sun rose
the robin sung,
again.


The author's comments:

I am a highschool student who goes to Trinity Episcopal School.  I have finished many works in my English class.  I have worked very hard on it and I believe that it is ready to be submitted to your publication.  I have taken some of my free time to edit this poem and have poured my heart out into it.   It is about the time my dog died when I was eight years old.  I tried to capture the emotion of the moment versus the emotion that I have about it now.


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