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The Courage of Letting Go

August 28, 2015
By MaddieDeTommaso BRONZE, Roeland Park, Kansas
MaddieDeTommaso BRONZE, Roeland Park, Kansas
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There is no wind
no breathing wind
only still air that
chokes the lungs              

she’s tired

she has been running
        for helpless miles
        there is a light
        she has decided,
             “a little while longer”
        she almost grasped it
        but she’s old, and the wind
        the gagging wind

is pushing on her shoulders

she’s tired

the grizzlies are crying
her knuckles clasp the dirt
her son’s face
flashes in reds and golds and

 

she’s tired
but she can finally
go to sleep

 


The author's comments:

In this poem, I was trying to replicate Native American writing, taking use of repition and cyclical views. This is my take on Native American liturature, and this is in no way actual Native work.


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