Sunset | Teen Ink


June 22, 2015
By aylinnnz GOLD, Bronx, New York
aylinnnz GOLD, Bronx, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Maybe no one's really crazy. Everyone is just a little bit mad. How much depends on where you fall in the spectrum. How much depends on how lucky you are." - Joshua Walters

The sun kissed the ocean’s edge.
Perhaps grazed is a better word.
She didn’t seem sentimental or tender enough
for a kiss. Not even a peck.
She actually seemed rather
She engulfed the ocean. She wanted him to reflect her
totally and wholly.
She wanted him to forfeit
his rich blue hue.
She was in his every corner, crack, wave, seam...
And then
she left him
empty and dark.
She left him
a blue-black and endless abyss.

The author's comments:

I was watching the sun set by the lake

and feeling some type of way about a special someone.

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