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The Heartless Experience

February 5, 2015
By AvengeMyBrokenSong GOLD, WHOOP, New York
AvengeMyBrokenSong GOLD, WHOOP, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"It takes more strength to cry at mid-defeat."
-Susan Boyle
"The closer you get to the light, the bigger your shadow becomes."
-Kingdom Hearts


Darkness.
That’s how it all began, wasn’t it?
And that’s how it will end……
…..I think…..
I’ve been falling forever.
No start.
No end.
It’s all the same now, really.
And who am I?
I don’t dare answer that.
Names, addresses, pictures….
They all swim through my head,
Without warning, with no preset destination.
And the silence.
Oh, the silence.
It deafens me.
Slithering like an ell in and out of my head,
I quake at the sound.
This frightens me
I am never scared.
Sheepish, determined, maybe.
But never afraid.
But wait!
What is that?
……………….
…….a light………..
And it’s calling to me.
I know this voice, this figure, these eyes.
And I am not afraid.
 


The author's comments:

I wrote this about Sora's experience when he was heartless and what he must have felt, then about Kairi calling him back to the light.


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on May. 23 2015 at 9:31 pm
AvengeMyBrokenSong GOLD, WHOOP, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"It takes more strength to cry at mid-defeat."
-Susan Boyle
"The closer you get to the light, the bigger your shadow becomes."
-Kingdom Hearts

And thank YOU for your wonderful comments:)

on Apr. 30 2015 at 10:11 am
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Our passion is our strength."
-Billie Joe Armstrong

You are an amazing writer! I've read a lot of your stuff and I'm in love with the way you write, and word things(: Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.

on Apr. 2 2015 at 11:58 am
AvengeMyBrokenSong GOLD, WHOOP, New York
18 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It takes more strength to cry at mid-defeat."
-Susan Boyle
"The closer you get to the light, the bigger your shadow becomes."
-Kingdom Hearts

@ThePoeticJustice thanks! I have a few others that are about KH if you want to check them out......wanted to write a fanfic or something but no one on here was interested so I just wrote poem after poem instead. xP

on Apr. 2 2015 at 10:33 am
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

XD when you said sora I put the pieces together XD I love kingdom hearts lol and this is a super awesome poem. Nice XD