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special cup

September 24, 2014
By Anonymous

My special artifact is my cup

It looks like a spider-man

I had it all my life ever since 3

No matter what state I was in it was with me

I liked it sooooo much

I always was laying down drinking out of it

I always get mad when someone use my cup

Or touch it without permission

It had a top on it sooooooooooooooo

I never had to think about it wasting

What I really like to do is too

Make some tea; pour it in my special cup

Put it on my bed fall asleep and in the morning

DRINK IT!!!!!!!!!!

And also a couple more things it has my favorite colors

I always hide it so no one can use it

Well everyone knows not too use it

It’s the best cup I have

I hope I never lose it if I do will be mad

But I love that cup..


The author's comments:

                 I’m going to tell you the common poetic devices I used.
                 The first one is sensory details (it looks like spider-man).
                 The next one is a very common one is punctuation.
                 Least but not last I used stanzas the whole time.
                 The last the I used is simile.

                 Well I didn’t really have a strategy. All I did is everyday you
                 Told us to write a poem I did it. Then when you said pick
                 Two poems I did. Then I just copy the poems and added a
                 Couple of things.
 


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