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My Fire

July 17, 2014
By creativeartsgirl BRONZE, Adel, Iowa
creativeartsgirl BRONZE, Adel, Iowa
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As I fall, I breath in the smoke from a fire.
Burning up my lungs so i can’t breath.

My brother, Coughing and can’t breath, his eyes shut close, like he gave up on me, my mom, and his family.


My mom trying to see if were ok.
asking the fireman and paramedics if her son and daughter are ok. They finally told her he was dead, she started to cry. of course i rush over & see if she’s ok.


The author's comments:
It seems though its true. But it not. this actually happened to my friend.

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