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I remember You ..... Even if you don't

July 3, 2014
By qasrd BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
qasrd BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
We fear rejection, want attention, crave affection and dream of perfection.


I remember you,
I remember the girl who was obedient,
Who actually cared,
Who loved,
Who felt,
And who actually had a heart.
But that girl was burned by a flame of a fire so hot.
I remember,
It's hard to forget.
I watched and felt the heat and the burn of the girl who walked on beach with a bottle of ice cold water thinking it would help.
But little did she know the Sun just kept burning and peeling away her innocence, her heart, and before you knew it, her body.
I wish I would have said something to save that girl.
But I didn't I watched and felt.
Now all I do is sit here and watch that girl fade away.
Because that girl,
was me.


The author's comments:
Everyone knows what its like to watch someone change and have them not see it . But what if that person who was changing was you and you knew it but kept ignoring it .

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on Jul. 6 2014 at 12:15 am
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

I love the way you worded your poem to say that she was changing without auctually coming out and saying that she was.