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Peace

June 17, 2014
By FreeAtLast GOLD, Limerick, Maine
FreeAtLast GOLD, Limerick, Maine
16 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
#RebelStatus


Peace is near,
Death is on the way.
Angels are screaming,
You're going home today.
Your speech gets softs,
The water gets thick,
Time is ticking.. tick, tick tick.
You grab your things,
You try to run
Yet times entertainment has just begun


The author's comments:
It was something I wrote from the top of my head

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on Jun. 24 2014 at 4:05 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

Nice flow, Great words and thoughts. But if you really need some honest comment, well it's a little short and sincerly at first I didn't really understand what you were talking about. But other than that it's deep and full of sense. I think you have something unique and special and you should keep writing to get better day after day ^_^ Nice work !

on Jun. 24 2014 at 3:49 pm
bella-nielsen GOLD, Marshall, Minnesota
13 articles 27 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"autism isn't contagious, but a smile is and that's what im afraid of."-grumpy cat

wow.. im impressed .  just wow

on Jun. 18 2014 at 8:22 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

This is great! I like its flow. :)