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Don't Push Away the Anecdote to Your Pain

April 5, 2014
By LivingLouder32 BRONZE, Nassau, New York
LivingLouder32 BRONZE, Nassau, New York
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He looks at her through blurry eyes.
She's walking away to his surprise.
He doesn't know what he has done.
What did he do to make her run?
He took her in and helped the pain.
But now all she does is drive him insane.
He begs and pleads for her to see.
All he's ever given was his love unconditionally.
He blames himself for her moving on.
8 strong months, what could he have done wrong?
Now he weeps to me and I soothe the pain.
I see what she does drives him insane.
He thinks about her and dreams of her face.
"We'll be together," she said, "I just need my space."
But 3 months is long enough, don't keep him waiting.
He spends his days simply anticipating.
Anticipating what? I'll never know.
Anticipating your love? Probably so.
But you're giving it to someone else, aren't you girl?
How dare you when he's made you his world!
You lead him on and its plain to see.
That's why every night he comes crying to me.


The author's comments:
Recently my friend has been having a hard time with a girl. They were together for 8 months. He's 17 and this was his first girlfriend and he loved her more than anyone. But she left him for absolutely no reason and he has been destroyed ever since. She said that they would be together again but it doesn't seem possible now that she has a boyfriend and she doesn't respond to my friend's texts anymore. I feel sorry for him. I can tell how deeply he cared for her by the ways he speaks of her little things that make her special like her laugh and her piercing and her favorite songs. It breaks my heart to see him hurt. He promised her that he will never tell another girl that he loves her and I feel bad because I think he deserves so much more.

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