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My Family

February 26, 2014
By Anonymous

My family is quite strange,
Though I would never have them change.

My brother and i fool around here and there,
But we both know we’ll forever care.

Many new inside jokes and nicknames,
It’s just how our relationship works we claim.

We grow up together year after year,
And our time to leave home comes near.

Our family love will exist forever,
And we’ll always be together.


The author's comments:
This is to my family, I love them very much

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on Mar. 6 2014 at 1:05 pm
mwurzer4 DIAMOND, Rochester, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Thou! thy truest type of grief is the gently falling leaf.&quot;<br /> -Edgar Allan Poe

the rhyme seems a bit forced.  try rewriting it without the rhyme and focus on the movement of the words (don't be afraid of enjambment!!).