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Perfect Timing

November 27, 2013
By ahherika BRONZE, South Plainfield, New Jersey
ahherika BRONZE, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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I look up at the clock in my room

And realize that I am late for work.

It is 3:21 on a Friday afternoon.

I change into my work clothes,

Grab a muffin off of the kitchen counter,

Say goodbye to my dad, and run

Out of the house to the beige Dodge

parked in the driveway.

I start the car and look at the clock.

It is 3:23 on a Friday afternoon.

I put the gear in reverse and pull

Out of the driveway. I fly down the main road

And come to a stop light on red.

As I wait impatiently for it to change to green,

I look at the clock.

It is 3:25 on a Friday afternoon.

I look back at the road as soon as

The light turns green for my lane.

I accelerate. An oncoming truck veers

Into my lane as it goes to make a right turn.

I swerve out of the way on impulse.

Startled but not frozen scared, I continue

Driving and pull into my job's parking lot.

I look at the clock.

It is 3:30 on a Friday afternoon.

I'm safe. I'm alive. And I'm right on time for work.



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on Dec. 3 2013 at 6:39 pm
EmmaClaire0823 GOLD, Bay Minette, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you wish to see in the world."

This was interesting and entertaining. I am a bit confused about what job starts at 3:30 in the afternoon so you could have made it more relatable by making it a time most people go to work like 8 in the morning. Also, the poem was a bit too much like a collection of sentences. Poetry flows a little more and is less structured.  Keep up the good work and remember practice makes perfect.